Some people believe that allowing children to make their own choices on everyday matters(such as food, clothes and entertainment) is likely to result in a society of individuals who only think about their own wishes. Other people believe that it is important for children to make decisions about matters that affect them.
People have different views on whether teenagers are given the freedom to make decisions. While I accept that choosing items on their own may have a potentially harmful impact on them, I believe that there are more likely to have a positive return in the long-term.
There are various reasons why people forbid children to make a decision on their own preferences. Firstly, they may assert that teenagers are lack moral judgment ability that they would accept and copy the ideas from mass media easily. For example, some negative figures in our society promote ideas of appearance and glamorous. Children would have the wrong illusion that attending a party and dressing well is the key to having a successful life. Secondly, students from elementary school cognitive levels are not developed well and they might underrate the potential impact of their favorite. For stance, junk food is the most popular snack in the eye of children, which has adverse effects on our bodies.
Despite the above arguments, I believe that allowing children to develop the skill of making choices. In the first place, there are various life tasks that they have to learn and experience in the whole life, such as making friends, preparing meals, and selecting subjects. After graduating from high school, they even have to decide whether to develop their career or take an undergraduate course at the university. A mature adult should have the ability to maintain their own living, without other's support. If parents restricted their opportunity to experience, they would eventually have no personal self-care ability.
In conclusion, although it might seem sensible to restrict freedom, I personally believe that we should give a chance to them.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, in the first place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1458.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18861209964 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59590917473 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612099644128 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5037103248 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 104.142857143 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0714285714 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.21428571429 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219284355706 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0781202583088 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0649943031893 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125358720859 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467211595796 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.0 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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