IT SEEMS CLEAR THAT OBESITY IN TODAY'S SOCIETY IS TO SOME EXTENT DUE TO THE AVAILABILITY OF FAST FOOD.SHOULD GOVERNMENTS PLACE TAX ON FAST FOOD TO REDUCE THE AMOUNT OF FAST FOOD CONSUMED. GIVE REASONS FOR YOUR ANSWER AND INCLUDE ANY RELEVANT EXAMPLE.
RECENT YEARS HAVE WITNESSED THAT DUE TO THE AVAILABILITY OF READY MADE FOOD PEOPLE HAVE SWITCHED TO FAST FOOD RATHER THAN HOME MADE ONE. IN MY OPINION THE GOVERNMENT SHOULD PUT SOME TAXES TO AVOID FAST FOOD CONSUMPTION .
IN GENERAL, TRADITIONAL FOOD IS THE BEST OPTION FOR PEOPLE WHO PREFER HEALTH OVER TASTE. HOME COOKED MEAL NOT ONLY CONTRIBUTES HEALTHY BODY BUT ALSO CREATES A STRONG CONNECTIVITY BETWEEN THE PERSON WHO COOKED AND THE PEOPLE THAT EAT THE FOOD ITEM.
ON THE OTHER HAND,BECAUSE OF THE RISE IN NUMBER OF RESTAURANTS AND FOOD VARIETIES AS WELL AS LACK OF TIME TODAY'S YOUNG PEOPLE ARE DRASTICALLY ADMIRED BY JUNK FOODS. MOST OF THE YOUNGSTERS ARE HIGHLY ATTRACTED BY THE UNIQUENESS AND THE RICH TASTE AS WELL AS AROMA OF THE READY MADE FOODS IGNORING HEALTH AND ACQUIRING DISEASES. OBESITY IS THE MAIN CAUSE AND HAS NOW BECOME A WORLD ISSUE.MANY GIRL CHILDREN GET MATURED AT A VERY YOUNG AGE.EVEN THOUGH A NUMBER OF AWARENESS ARE HELD BY GOVERNMENT AND HEALTH OFFICIALS NOTHING COULD BE SEEN THAT MUCH INFORMATIVE AND PEOPLE ARE VERY UNLIKELY TO LISTEN.BOTTLED AND PACKED FOOD HAVE ALREADY BECOME ONE OF THE ESSENTIAL ITEMS.
HOWEVER, THE INVOLVEMENT OF THE GOVERNMENT TO CREATE SELF CONTROL AMONG PEOPLE, IMPOSING TAX ON FAST FOOD MAY BE ONE OF THE POSSIBLE SOLUTIONS. INCREASING THE PRICES OF READY TO EAT TYPE OF EATABLES AND ALSO MAKING THE HEALTHY FOODS LESS EXPENSIVE WOULD INSIST PEOPLE TO BUY HEALTHIER ONE. THIS WOULD DEFINITELY GIVE RISE TO OBESE FREE SOCIETY. FOR EXAMPLE, THE COST OF SALAD COULD BE SOLD LESS COMPARING WITH A BURGER.
IN CONCLUSION,FOR ENSURING A HEALTHY LIFE STYLE OF PEOPLE IMPOSING TAX ON JUNK FOOD WOULD BE THE BEST WAY AND EVENTUALLY THIS WOULD LEAD TO A SAFE AND SOUND SOCIETY.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, well, for example, in conclusion, in general, as well as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1447.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.87205387205 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60464299429 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565656565657 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 456.3 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 71.1100477351 49.4020404114 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.583333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.75 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.25 7.06120827912 145% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271923973158 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.107435655489 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0810349753846 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15681244917 0.151304729494 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0924058520723 0.056905535591 162% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.45 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.