Anyone found guilty of committing a crime should be sent to prison. Do you agree or disagree?
Imprisonment has been considered to be a widely applied option for offenders recently. However, there is still a source of controversy whether all the offenders, regardless of their crimes, should be sentenced to imprisonment. I completely disagree with this view and believe that only certain crimes should be sent to prison.
There are two major reasons why we should not imprison all the criminals. Firstly, if this policy were implemented, it would lead to prison packed. In other words, there would be no room for subsequent offenders who commit more serious crimes rather than such delinquencies as joyriding or shoplifting. Secondly, putting criminals of even minor crimes into prison would not act as a deterrent to crime. It is evident that the imposition of imprisonment sentence shows little reduction in the general crime rate. Therefore, I believe imprisonment is not always an effective type of sentence for all the crimes.
On the other hand, I think that this only certain serious crimes such as homicide, trafficking or crimes related to politics should be imprisoned if forced to do so. The primary purpose of imprisonment is to keep such offenders from the society, which is to ensure the safety of denizens. Furthermore, serious offenders sent to prison would be reformed psychologically and physically in a rather harsh condition in the hope that they would not repeat the crime when re-entering the society. For those who have committed minor crimes, I think it would be better if we imposed such alternatives as community service and probation. For example, instead of being imprisoned, juvenile criminals should be sent to reform school, which is believed to be a more appropriate environment for them to rehabilitate.
In conclusion, I believe not all the criminals deserve to receive imprisonment sentence because of prison packed and ineffective deterrent. I think this type of sentence should be applied to serious offenders, and we should impose alternatives to those who commit minor crimes.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2024-11-07 | hahoaan | 89 | view |
| 2024-11-06 | Nguyen Thinh | 56 | view |
| 2024-11-06 | phannhi1511@ | 56 | view |
| 2024-11-06 | Nhi3132006 | 56 | view |
| 2024-11-06 | Thai Tran | 87 | view |
- Some people think that public transport should be funded by the government so that it can be free to the people who use it To what extent do you agree or disagree 91
- The charts below show the percentage of people working in different sectors in town A and town B in 1960 2010 73
- Topic More and more people are migrating to cities in search of better life but city life can be extremely difficult Explain some of the difficulties of living in a city How can governments make urban life better for everyone 78
- Some people think international car free days are an effective way of reducing air pollution others think there are some other ways Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- The diagram below shows how photographs can be produced using digital photographic equipment 66
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, therefore, for example, i think, in conclusion, such as, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 324.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25617283951 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24264068712 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02032154739 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512345679012 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.9343476878 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 106.4375 106.682146367 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0625 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 14.0 3.9879759519 351% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268326066253 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0952563217336 0.084324248473 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0745494488712 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.185951390554 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0451921234402 0.056905535591 79% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.