The diagram below shows the typical stages of consumer goods manufacturing, including the process by which information is feedback to earlier stages to enable adjustment.
The presentation shows patterns of good manufacturing and customer feedback. The data shows in a diagram format.
At first sight, it can be clearly seen that the first stage is raw materials as well as a manufactured component. After all material and component stores in someplace and discuss about production planning. and it is in depends on design. The next step is to assembly all components the same as a design And chacking these goods. Testing is also needed for manufacture and check good is the same as a design. The next packing stage relies on market research like which type of packing is complacency in the customer. After despatch complete product and put in the market for sales. Sales in the important role are market research, in addition, advertising shows product futures or it help in market research. Product design also affects sales. Product research is necessary for finding design.
Overall, Feedback is the greatest basis of the product manufacturer and the Chain development process starts from the collection of raw materials and the final process is a sale.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 207, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: And
... and discuss about production planning. and it is in depends on design. The next st...
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Line 3, column 684, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'helps'?
Suggestion: helps
...advertising shows product futures or it help in market research. Product design also...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, so, well, after all, in addition, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 33.7804878049 62% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 915.0 965.302439024 95% => OK
No of words: 180.0 196.424390244 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08333333333 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.66284150148 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78174716392 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 276.3 283.868780488 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 8.94146341463 145% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 40.6289313073 43.030603864 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.3846153846 112.824112599 62% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.8461538462 22.9334400587 60% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.38461538462 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172265920698 0.215688989381 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0607992003393 0.103423049105 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0686808506895 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152426222096 0.15604864568 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0691161623891 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 13.2329268293 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 61.2550243902 109% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 10.3012195122 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.59 11.4140731707 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.37 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 40.7170731707 142% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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