Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement
We are getting fascinating and overwhelming development in the all fields so that we can choose anything from anywhere. Yes, I strongly believe that nowadays we have a too many choices. I think internet and industries are two major aspects.
Some people believe that at present they have not too much facility.
I think they all are belongs to countryside. So that they may be have a trouble for their study and also they did not get proper electricity. They also argue that government should not look at them thus they become a poor and less tech savvy. Country sides people wants all the thing which city side people already got it as like a library, hospital, education, electric, water, home, mainly telephonic connection and TV. That’s why they disappointing and disagree with the statement.
On the other hand, I along with others assert that nowadays we have a too much choices. There were many aspects behind of choices. Firstly, competition is very stiff so that competitor innovate new thing with a new ideas therefore we have option for choosing different types of variety product. Secondly, education stander is too much high that we have different field with different usage. For instance, my father wanted to me to took an admission in mechanical field so I found lot many colleges whom have a mechanical course so I have a good opportunity for choosing a best college in my hometown.
In addition, the advancement of technology has enabled us to get accurate information from the internet anytime we want. It is also undeniable that the internet has taken number of choices for us. For example numbers of media are available. There are countless website for browsing and surfing although entertaining options are also available on the internet. However, there are many social applications also available nowadays.
In conclusion, some people assert that they are totally disagree with the statement, however I firmly believe that we are blessed with so many option to pick from in this modern era and innovation of technology is increase day by day so that I agree with the statement.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, firstly, however, if, look, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, for example, for instance, i think, in addition, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 47.0 24.0651302605 195% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1754.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.96883852691 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74597346641 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.549575070822 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 58.6096408452 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.7 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.65 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.3 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.314156928466 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0917399235377 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.099659449194 0.0667982634062 149% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.175523750147 0.151304729494 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0908364602138 0.056905535591 160% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.25 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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