More and more wild animals are on the verge of extinction and others are on the endangered list. What are the reasons for this? What can be done to solve this problem?
In recent times, majority of beasts are on risk of disappearance and mortality rate of many wild creatures are increasing day by day. The principal problem is urban development of the various nation towards the borders and the possible solution is government should pose strict advisory on such kind of activities.
The foremost problem is development of buildings and public places on the border area, which is the primary shelter for many wild animals. People having extremely stressed life in cities they forced themselves to migrant in quiet locations to increase their life-span. Because of that level of deforestation increasing dramatically. As a result, ultimately their food-cycle was disturbed , which make them difficult to survive. For example, The Canadian government reveals the main reason for lapsed species of polar beer is construction of road and public area outside the urban areas.
A possible solution to this is the concerned government can save their lives in many ways, one of them is they can apply custodies to those masses, who are responsible for cutting the trees for their own benefits and luxury life demands. For instance, An article published in magazine shows, In December 2019, Australian government posed very strong punishment to many rich locals for deforestation in authorized forest land , as it was unsafe for their national animal Kangaroo’s habitat.
To conclude, Cutting of more and more trees cause major problems to their natural behavior and create major problem for them to face , but the possible solution is to do not give permission for such kind of projects , which already adopted by many countries. It is also predicted that one can develop wild sanctuary to save their lives.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, for example, for instance, kind of, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
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Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1457.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24100719424 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80172590107 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589928057554 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.5939172749 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 132.454545455 106.682146367 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.2727272727 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161743159029 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.054540499593 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0466356886293 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0968707783315 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0484034615242 0.056905535591 85% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.41 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.76 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.