Providing a national system in a country where the unemployed receive a regular payment only encourages people not to seek work and puts an unreasonable strain on a country's financial resources.
Discuss this statement and give your opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your knowledge.
There is no doubt in my mind that the prime responsibility of any nation's government is provide the basic necessities to each and every citizen of country. Therefore, providing a regular payment to the unemployed sometimes encourages them not to seek for a job and this may lead to a burden on a economy of country.
Let me begin with an example of developed nations like Canada, New Zealand and United Kingdom where the government provide Minimum wages to their citizen for their survival only. There are two more forms of Wages, Fair Wage system where the government takes care of citizen's survival and their health. Whereas, the last form is known as Living Wages which includes entertainment also apart for survival and health which needs to be earn by individual only.
For providing the first two forms of wages to the unemployed, the government has to consider all ins and outs of the finances.because this will surely affects the economy. Whether it is a developing nation with emerging economies or a developed nation with super strong assets, unemployment is always a biggest bottleneck of development and growth.
In an addendum to this, financial support to unemployed also tends to lathargy to those people as they know that the government is backing them with minimum or sometimes with fair wages, By doing so, the government is unintentionally demoralising the employed or underemployed people of the country. To illustrate, let me give you an another example of New Zealand, where the Maoris-native Kiwis are eligible for $3500/- every month if they are not working.
I my opinion, if a citizen of any nation is unemployed for any reason, then it is government failure. Thereby, they are ought to provide them either of one thing, job or fair wage.
- Providing a national system in a country where the unemployed receive a regular payment only encourages people not to seek work and puts an unreasonable strain on a country s financial resources Discuss this statement and give your opinion Give reasons fo 56
- Providing a national system in a country where the unemployed receive a regular payment only encourages people not to seek work and puts an unreasonable strain on a country s financial resources Discuss this statement and give your opinion Give reasons fo 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...nd that the prime responsibility of any nations government is provide the basic necessi...
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Line 1, column 89, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'provided'.
Suggestion: provided
...onsibility of any nations government is provide the basic necessities to each and every...
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Line 1, column 101, Rule ID: BASIC_FUNDAMENTALS[1]
Message: Use simply 'necessities'.
Suggestion: necessities
...f any nations government is provide the basic necessities to each and every citizen of country. T...
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Line 1, column 295, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
... a job and this may lead to a burden on a economy of country. Let me begin wit...
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Line 5, column 152, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'affect'
Suggestion: affect
...f the finances.because this will surely affects the economy. Whether it is a developing...
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Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...r strong assets, unemployment is always a biggest bottleneck of development and g...
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Line 7, column 332, Rule ID: AN_ANOTHER[1]
Message: One of these determiners is redundant in this context. Choose only one: 'an example' or 'another example'.
Suggestion: an example; another example
...country. To illustrate, let me give you an another example of New Zealand, where the Maoris-native...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, then, therefore, whereas, as to, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1478.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.97643097643 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89386839023 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.535353535354 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 472.5 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 53.7205810323 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.363636364 106.682146367 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 20.7667163134 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169730490574 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0671533093365 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0443245457499 0.0667982634062 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0987280222775 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0342780745413 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.64 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.