- Your friend bought tickets to the theatre for both of you. Write a letter to a friend to tell him that you cannot go to the theatre.
In your letter
- Apologize,
- Explain the situation,
- Tell him what he can do with the extra ticket.
Dear Jane,
I hope so you are well and enjoying good health. I know that this Friday we have to go theater for watching a movie but due to unforeseen conditions I won’t be able to come with you so please apologize for the same.
Actually, I was very excited to come with you for theater this Friday but because of the sudden death of my relative have changed our plan. My maternal uncle met with a fatal accident in spite of a good cure by doctors for two days he died. Suddenly, the departure of his soul made us sad. As part of religious rituals, I can’t go anywhere for twelve days.
I know that you had bought two tickets so better I would suggest you go to a theater. I also advise you that you should take our school friend Jack along with you on my ticket so you won’t feel alone but you will cherish the moments together.
Yours Lovingly,
XYZ
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, so, well, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 707.0 937.175257732 75% => OK
No of words: 164.0 206.0 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.31097560976 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.57858190836 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.22288506788 2.54303337028 87% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.646341463415 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 290.88556701 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.4630443396 44.8134815571 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.5555555556 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.66666666667 4.34317383033 107% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.252116105276 0.216113520407 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0968262940464 0.0766984524023 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0625656583779 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159058974158 0.12726935374 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0630147690857 0.0580467560999 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 78.59 70.7449484536 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.72 8.71597938144 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.74 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 41.2886597938 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.