You work for an international company, and would like to spend six months working in its head office in another country.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter:
Explain why you want to work in the company’s head office for six months
Say how your work could be done while you are away.
Ask for his/her help in arranging it
Dear Mr. Senthil,
I am writing this letter to express my desire for working at the headquarter of our company in the Netherlands for a short period of six months.
As you are aware, our company is looking for a candidate who can work in the main office for six months. Therefore, I thought I should grab this golden opportunity of working in a different country. In addition to this, by working there, I may enhance my skills and broaden the horizon of my knowledge. I have also heard that our company conducts weekend training sessions which may enhance my product knowledge and required set of skills.
I have already conveyed to Mahesh about the same and he has agreed to take up my all work responsibilities during my absence. Moreover, I will not only stay in touch with my team but will also check my emails daily. If my request for foreign posting is accepted, I will make sure that no work is left pending at my end.
Finally, I would need your assistance in getting approvals for my posting in the Netherlands from competent authorities.
I look forward to your positive reply.
Yours sincerely,
Hero Devrani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 62, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...ter to express my desire for working at the headquarter of our company in the Netherlands for a...
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Line 4, column 426, Rule ID: NEEDS_FIXED[1]
Message: "required set" is only accepted in certain dialects. For something more widely acceptable, try 'set' or 'to be set'.
Suggestion: set; to be set
...hance my product knowledge and required set of skills. I have already conveyed t...
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, look, may, moreover, so, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 941.0 937.175257732 100% => OK
No of words: 198.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75252525253 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75116612262 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7085637749 2.54303337028 107% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.641414141414 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2174756783 44.8134815571 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.5454545455 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 16.8248392259 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.45454545455 4.34317383033 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261335077049 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105874734402 0.0766984524023 138% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0848071892013 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14583790228 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725233740612 0.0580467560999 125% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 8.71597938144 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.28 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 8.62886597938 104% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.