You did a bus tour with other people, however; you were not satisfied with the bus service
Write a letter to the bus company about your journey and explain
• What the problem with your tour was
• Why you were not satisfied
• Suggest how the company can improve
Dear Sir/Madam,
I am writing this letter to you about dissatisfaction with your bus service. I frequently travel with your tour agency having a good travel experience but this time I had a bad experience with your company.
This time I was traveling with your bus no.MH 01 2518 onboarding ticket no. AWZXC from Mumbai to Ahmedabad on 13th January 2020. While traveling your bus on the said route I faced several problems. I was neither given a water bottle nor blanket during the whole journey.
Because of the non-provision of the water bottle, I was not able to quench my thirst. Moreover, I was not able to sleep well on account of the non-supply of the blanket by your employees. I felt totally devastated during the itinerary which made me make a complaint about it to you.
I have some suggestions for improving the quality of your services which may not cause any dissatisfaction with your customers including me in the future. First of all, I suggest you train your staff for the best customer service in the travel industry and secondly, I request you to advice your employees to put all the necessary items on the seat of the traveler in advance so that they don’t have to ask for those things during the journey.
Hoping for prompt action in that regard.
Yours Faithfully,
Jack Marvel
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
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| 2020-05-16 | Hero Devrani | 96 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 2, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing this letter to you about diss...
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Line 5, column 130, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “While” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...mbai to Ahmedabad on 13th January 2020. While traveling your bus on the said route I ...
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Line 6, column 98, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...t able to quench my thirst. Moreover, I was not able to sleep well on account of...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e me make a complaint about it to you. I have some suggestions for improving th...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 26.3917525773 129% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1092.0 937.175257732 117% => OK
No of words: 228.0 206.0 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78947368421 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68032340951 2.54303337028 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.600877192982 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 326.7 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0684729861 44.8134815571 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.0 76.5299724578 110% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.5384615385 16.8248392259 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.69230769231 4.34317383033 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321429914131 0.216113520407 149% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103102114184 0.0766984524023 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0849663713392 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1551333439 0.12726935374 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.108793736602 0.0580467560999 187% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.21 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 7.59969072165 103% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.