Write a letter to your manager complaining about parking problems and suggest some solutions.
What are the problems
Why should solve the problems
How to solve the problems.
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am writing this letter to report on the lack of parking facilities in our office parking area.
I have been working in our office as an accounts executive for the last 5 years. Let me explain the problems faced by our staff members. Firstly, vehicle owners tend to park their vehicles in an improper manner and there is no separate place arranged by management for parking two-wheelers and four-wheelers separately, which makes parking difficult for everyone. Moreover, there is no parking space is left for our colleagues as outsiders park their vehicles in our premises parking area, because of that we have to park our vehicles at other places.
Therefore, I suggest the management to address the above-mentioned problem at the earliest to avoid any unforeseen event. In addition to this, if authority takes steps to make parking smooth and systematic then it would save time for employees.
This problem can be solved by appointing trained security guards at the parking spot. Those guards will make proper arrangements for systematic parking and they will not only assist vehicle owners but also disallow parking by outsiders in premises of the company.
I expect a positive response from you.
Yours sincerely,
Hero Devrani
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 189, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an improper manner" with adverb for "improper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...icle owners tend to park their vehicles in an improper manner and there is no separate place arranged...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, moreover, so, then, therefore, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1064.0 937.175257732 114% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19024390244 4.54256449028 114% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75696511276 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 127.690721649 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639024390244 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 328.5 290.88556701 113% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 60.4803089327 44.8134815571 135% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.7272727273 76.5299724578 126% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.6363636364 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 4.34317383033 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192832909741 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787170732241 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707415636582 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100247850829 0.12726935374 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053757105271 0.0580467560999 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 8.37731958763 147% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 70.7449484536 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.82 8.71597938144 147% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 41.2886597938 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.