People learn things better from those at their own level - such as fellow students or co-workers - than from those at a higher level, such as teachers or supervisors.
Throughout our lives, we are always learning. One may acquire knowledge from books, learn skills from experts, or gain wisdom from experiences. While other times, we learn from people around us. In my opinion, people learn better from those who are more skilled and knowledgeable than those who have the same skills and knowledge as they do, for two reasons.
To begin, learning from experts is more reliable. Teachers are trained to guide students in need and teach them professional skills. Though it is true that students can discuss with their classmates and figure out the answers together, the method used may not be the best. For instance, I tried to study math with my friends in my first year of junior high, but the result was not ideal. It ended up that we misunderstood some of the basic concepts due to a lack of background knowledge. Therefore, I found a tutor who had years of experience in teaching math. She clarified my misconceptions and fixed the problems I had fundamentally.
Second, learning from people at a higher level is more efficient. Since teachers and supervisors are usually older and more experienced, their opinions and advice are more convincing than classmates and co-workers. For example, if I ask a friend for suggestions of my speech, I might disagree with her because I don’t want to admit my shortcomings. Nonetheless, if an English teacher asks me to improve my intonation, I will start practicing without hesitation because I believe in the credibility of their advice. Although discussing with classmates and sharing ideas are another way of learning, it’s not that accurate and effective. Additionally, owing to their past experience, teachers often have some astonishing strategies that students do not, which may help us dramatically.
To sum up, people learn better from experts than from those at their own level because it is more reliable and efficient. Teachers and supervisors can provide us methods based on their experience, boosting our knowledge and skills significantly.
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- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement People today spend too much time on personal enjoyment doing things they like to do rather than doing things they should do Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer 90
- People learn things better from those at their own level such as fellow students or co workers than from those at a higher level such as teachers or supervisors 76
- A person should never make an important decision alone 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 224, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
... around us. In my opinion, people learn better from those who are more skilled and kno...
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Line 3, column 423, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: some
...deal. It ended up that we misunderstood some of the basic concepts due to a lack of backgro...
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Line 5, column 666, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
...effective. Additionally, owing to their past experience, teachers often have some astonishing s...
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Line 7, column 25, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to better', 'to well'
Suggestion: to better; to well
...ramatically. To sum up, people learn better from experts than from those at their o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, nonetheless, second, so, therefore, while, for example, for instance, in my opinion, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 15.1003584229 79% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 9.8082437276 82% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 13.8261648746 116% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 45.0 43.0788530466 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1710.0 1977.66487455 86% => OK
No of words: 332.0 407.700716846 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15060240964 4.8611393121 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.48103885553 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95327600537 2.67179642975 111% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 212.727598566 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590361445783 0.524837075471 112% => OK
syllable_count: 511.2 618.680645161 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.59856630824 104% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.0778470725 48.9658058833 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.0 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4736842105 20.6045352989 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.68421052632 5.45110844103 123% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.323067918376 0.236089414692 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0957355710116 0.076458572812 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.122958778914 0.0737576698707 167% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.219295851886 0.150856017488 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.116208812021 0.0645574589148 180% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 11.7677419355 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 58.1214874552 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.1575268817 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.29 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.52 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 86.8835125448 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 10.002688172 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.