The following appeared in a letter to the editor of a journal on environmental issues.
"Over the past year, the Crust Copper Company (CCC) has purchased over 10,000 square miles of land in the tropical nation of West Fredonia. Mining copper on this land will inevitably result in pollution and, since West Fredonia is the home of several endangered animal species, in environmental disaster. But such disasters can be prevented if consumers simply refuse to purchase products that are made with CCC's copper unless the company abandons its mining plans."
The letter propose the consumers refuse to buy Crust copper company (CCC)'s products unless the company abandon its mining plan on West Fredonia, a home of several endangered animal species, in order to prevent West Fredonia form natural disasters. such a suggestion is based on the fact that mining copper on West Fredonia ineluctantly result pollutions and that consumers' purchasing power can create great pressure on CCC to change the company's strategy. However, these two assumptions are filled with holes. Before rushing into conclusions, we need to answer at least three questions to better understand the picture.
Firstly, does the mining activity by CCC actually create unbearable negative influence for West Fredonia? The author of the letter prematurely assumes that CCC's purchasing of the land is bonded with future disasters for West Fredonia, which may not be true. Since the nature has its remarkable self-curing power, moderate resource exploration with scientific standards can even be a good thing for our environment. if the mining activities are conducted in nonpopulated areas where seldom animals inhabit, CCC could do little harm to the natural environment. The pollution that brought by mining activities may also be within limits if taken good care of. Thus, without understanding the degree of harm, the assumption that mining copper will create natural disasters does not hold water.
Secondly, is it realistic to rely on consumers to pressure CCC to change their mining plan? In other words, do consumers have enough incentive to refuse to buy CCC's product? The answer to this question is likely to be 'no' due to multiple possibilities. The consumers may have little room to choose products made by copper, which leave them with no choice but to use CCC's products. further, even if the consumers have much purchasing power, the majority of them may not care about protecting environment and therefore results in little pressure on CCC. if the assumptions above are true, then the argument will be significantly weakened.
Lastly, even if the consumers generate enough pressure for CCC, how much possible could CCC abandon its mining plans? As we are told by the letter, CCC has already bought over 10,000 square miles of land in West Fredonia and therefore it inevitably bears a significant transition cost. such a great cost can prevent CCC to change its business plan even under threatening situations. if that's true, then little can we do to stop CCC's mining activities.
In conclusion, the letter's argument does not hold unless further investigation and research are done. we need to understand the detailed situation of CCC's mining plan, West Fredonia's situation and consumers' background based on reliable research. Only then can we fully evaluate the proprosing recommendation in a fair and robust way.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 16 15
No. of Words: 455 350
No. of Characters: 2339 1500
No. of Different Words: 220 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.619 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.141 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.731 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 182 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 125 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 99 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 64 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 28.438 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 19.487 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.875 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.344 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.56 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.145 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: 0cm
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Line 1, column 314, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: 0cm
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Line 1, column 978, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Such
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Suggestion: If
...en be a good thing for our environment. if the mining activities are conducted in ...
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Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Further
...ith no choice but to use CCCs products. further, even if the consumers have much purcha...
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Suggestion: If
...fore results in little pressure on CCC. if the assumptions above are true, then th...
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Suggestion: Such
...ly bears a significant transition cost. such a great cost can prevent CCC to change ...
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Suggestion: If
...plan even under threatening situations. if thats true, then little can we do to st...
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...n even under threatening situations. if thats true, then little can we do to stop CCC...
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Line 1, column 3246, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'letters'' or 'letter's'?
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...er investigation and research are done. we need to understand the detailed situati...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, may, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, thus, at least, in conclusion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 19.6327345309 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 12.9520958084 116% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 13.6137724551 59% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 28.8173652695 76% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 55.5748502994 106% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 16.3942115768 110% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3144.0 2260.96107784 139% => OK
No of words: 518.0 441.139720559 117% => OK
Chars per words: 6.0694980695 5.12650576532 118% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.77070365392 4.56307096286 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.55415675658 2.78398813304 164% => OK
Unique words: 276.0 204.123752495 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.532818532819 0.468620217663 114% => OK
syllable_count: 900.9 705.55239521 128% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.76447105788 91% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.70958083832 295% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.22255489022 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 178.673604902 57.8364921388 309% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 136.695652174 119.503703932 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.5217391304 23.324526521 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.39130434783 5.70786347227 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 5.15768463074 19% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 11.0 5.25449101796 209% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.20758483034 110% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 6.88822355289 174% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186085453421 0.218282227539 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0591223310483 0.0743258471296 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659565418286 0.0701772020484 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186085453421 0.128457276422 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0628817314937 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.4 14.3799401198 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.3550499002 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 18.22 12.5979740519 145% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.84 8.32208582834 106% => OK
difficult_words: 135.0 98.500998004 137% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 36.0 12.3882235529 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.9071856287 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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