Many people visit museums when they travel to new places. Why
do you think people visit museums? Use specific reasons and
examples to support your answer.
People have a variety of interests and fortunately there are museums in different genders such as war, history, gun, sport. Visiting your favorite national team is really good experience. For example, last year I traveled to Brazil. Soccer is the most interesting thing in my life.
I visit a soccer museum in Rio. Throughout visiting that museum, I was so emotional. Imagine that I could see T-shirt, shoes and socks of Brazilian stars such as Ronaldo, Rivaldo and Pele. I watched many trophies that have been achieved by Brazilian national team.
Secondly, museum help us to increase our information about the city that we travel. I am from Iran and Iran was a royal country and one of the older culture in the world. Foreign tourists are very excited when visit our museum. visit those museums. They learn many interesting knowledge about our language, history, architecture and so on.
In summary, visiting museums is very good option when we travel to new places. museums not only are very entertaining and support lots of tests, but they also cause that we learn many information about those new places
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 229, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Visit
...are very excited when visit our museum. visit those museums. They learn many interest...
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Line 4, column 261, Rule ID: MANY_NN_U[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun knowledge seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much interesting knowledge', 'a good deal of interesting knowledge'.
Suggestion: much interesting knowledge; a good deal of interesting knowledge
...museum. visit those museums. They learn many interesting knowledge about our language, history, architectu...
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Line 6, column 80, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Museums
...od option when we travel to new places. museums not only are very entertaining and supp...
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Line 6, column 180, Rule ID: MANY_FEW_UNCOUNTABLE[2]
Message: Use 'much' or 'little' with uncountable nouns.
Suggestion: much; little
...ests, but they also cause that we learn many information about those new places
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much information', 'a good deal of information'.
Suggestion: much information; a good deal of information
...ests, but they also cause that we learn many information about those new places
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Line 6, column 219, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... many information about those new places
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, second, secondly, so, for example, in summary, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 6.8 118% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 5.60731707317 428% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 33.7804878049 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 931.0 965.302439024 96% => OK
No of words: 187.0 196.424390244 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97860962567 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57988000389 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 106.607317073 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 283.868780488 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 4.33902439024 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.482926829268 207% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 8.94146341463 168% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 22.4926829268 53% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8443436456 43.030603864 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 62.0666666667 112.824112599 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 12.4666666667 22.9334400587 54% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.13333333333 5.23603664747 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 3.70975609756 216% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.330205025192 0.215688989381 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108203727546 0.103423049105 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0831540883798 0.0843802449381 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.191546080998 0.15604864568 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0518960831382 0.0819641961636 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.2329268293 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 10.3012195122 78% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.72 11.4140731707 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.37 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 11.4329268293 44% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 6.8 10.9970731707 62% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.