Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big
city. Which place would you prefer to live in? Use specific reasons and
details to support your answer.
Decision about living in small or big cities depends of many factors such as our jobs, our characteristics and life style that we like. choosing either of them has some advantages and disadvantages. The advantages of living in a small city persuade me to ignore its shortages. I would like to explain articulately
my views on this point.
Since there are not many factories and vehicles in small cities, traffic and pollution is minimum. Many peoples are died every year due to chemical pollution. Factories and vehicles not only have destructive effects on people's health, but also people are suffered because of their noise pollutions. Investigations of some psychologists show that many mental illness stem from noise pollution. Living in small cities decreases these dangers from our life.
Furthermore, I love meet people and having a good relationship with my neighborhoods. It is really amazing that we sometimes get together, and have a friendly discussion. I think that people in the big cities are very busy and don’t have time for spending time with their neighbors.
In conclusion, I my idea living in small towns is better that big cities for two main reasons. Chemical pollution and noise prolusion are ignorable in small towns. Beside, you are not as busy as someone who lives in big cities. So, you can spend more time with your friends and neighbors
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 137, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Choosing
...cteristics and life style that we like. choosing either of them has some advantages and ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, really, so, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 7.30242825607 164% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 12.0772626932 50% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 22.412803532 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 30.3222958057 96% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1373.03311258 84% => OK
No of words: 228.0 270.72406181 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.06140350877 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88582923847 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.82841352232 2.5805825403 110% => OK
Unique words: 138.0 145.348785872 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.605263157895 0.540411800872 112% => OK
syllable_count: 358.2 419.366225166 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 8.23620309051 12% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 2.5761589404 78% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 13.0662251656 122% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 21.2450331126 66% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.4704945722 49.2860985944 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 72.125 110.228320801 65% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.25 21.698381199 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.4375 7.06452816374 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 4.45695364238 157% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.27373068433 70% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.239431890945 0.272083759551 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0765844897411 0.0996497079465 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.064955524901 0.0662205650399 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117842136558 0.162205337803 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0859297588173 0.0443174109184 194% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.3589403974 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.27 53.8541721854 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.8 11.0289183223 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.48 12.2367328918 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.86 8.42419426049 93% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.498013245 72% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.2008830022 71% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 85.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 25.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.