Claim: No act is done purely for the benefit of others.
The present world is dominated by the power of economics, the pursue of wealth. People have integrated the concept of profit-loss in their lives. Every actions are weighed before performed thus marked by profound self-interest. People's are getting result oriented. In such scenario, it is probable to believe that all actions-even those that seem to be done for other people-are based on self interest. However, this is not entirely true. In the world we live, there are those peoples who leave material pleasures and selfishness of every forms and truly serve their deeds for the benefit of other people.
There are many examples where celebrities, famous persons, rich people's help the needy with large amount of donations, conduct reforms and social works. The intention behind their deeds-whether to earn fame or merely to serve people, is difficult to discern. However, there are such people who have nothing to receive, who hide behind the fame and devote themselves completely in serving the people. One of the example is the CNN hero of Nepal, Anuradha Koirala has been constanly supporting the Nepalese girls against sex trafficking, who doesn't interst to come to light so much.
The love of a mother in no ways can be accounted as to self interest. Such feelings-the unselfish concern of people lie with them but are suppressed by the needs and desires to get along and get ahead, the pursue for more wealth, greed and desires. People are respected for the power of money rather than for their altruism and morality. People nearing their death realizing they have nothing to take with them, sometimes give everything to charity just believing the need to benefit the others. Thus, I don't believe that "No act is done purely for the benefit of others". Our system and society could be flawed which had make people driven entirely by self interest and make people believe to it, but there are people who stay beyond the flaw.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...is dominated by the power of economics, the pursue of wealth. People have integrated the c...
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Message: 'Each' and 'every' are used with singular. Did you mean 'all'?
Suggestion: All
... concept of profit-loss in their lives. Every actions are weighed before performed th...
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Line 2, column 72, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...elebrities, famous persons, rich peoples help the needy with large amount of dona...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
...lese girls against sex trafficking, who doesnt interst to come to light so much. T...
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Suggestion:
...oesnt interst to come to light so much. The love of a mother in no ways can be a...
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...and desires to get along and get ahead, the pursue for more wealth, greed and desires. Peo...
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Line 3, column 365, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
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Suggestion:
...and morality. People nearing their death realizing they have nothing to take with...
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Suggestion: don't
...the need to benefit the others. Thus, I dont believe that 'No act is done purel...
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Message: Possible agreement error -- use past participle here: 'made'.
Suggestion: made
...m and society could be flawed which had make people driven entirely by self interest...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...e are people who stay beyond the flaw.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 19.5258426966 97% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 12.4196629213 24% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 11.3162921348 88% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 33.0505617978 61% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 58.6224719101 77% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 12.9106741573 8% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1625.0 2235.4752809 73% => OK
No of words: 325.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.0 5.05705443957 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24591054749 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53820231777 2.79657885939 91% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.596923076923 0.4932671777 121% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 704.065955056 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 6.24550561798 64% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.38483146067 46% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.2370786517 84% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 23.0359550562 82% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 48.3041115976 60.3974514979 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.5882352941 118.986275619 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.1176470588 23.4991977007 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.94117647059 5.21951772744 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.97078651685 60% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.184236129645 0.243740707755 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621557987743 0.0831039109588 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.123199060166 0.0758088955206 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.118323282583 0.150359130593 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.093299313912 0.0667264976115 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.7 14.1392134831 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 48.8420337079 107% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 12.1743820225 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.61 8.38706741573 103% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 100.480337079 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.8971910112 59% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 11.2143820225 86% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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