Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
Life today is easier and more comfortable than it was when your grandparents were children.
Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Conditions of life always change during the time. And of course, our present life is quite different than the life lived by our grandparents. I agree with the statement that our life today is way more better than it was for our grandapernts when they were kids. And here are my justifications.
To begin with, comforts of our life that we have, couldn't be afforded to our grandparents when they were young. For example, education, oir grandparents weren't educated the same way we did, they hadn't acces to internet with a lot of information in it, or, another example, entertainment, we can play videogames, go to the cinema, watch animated series at home on tv, nothing from this examples, and many others that weren't mentioned by me, existed when our grandparents were children. Thus, in my opinion, it was pretty boring during the time when our grandparents were kids.
Moreover, the impacts of wars. Beyond controversy, there will always be wars while there are people, but the amount and brutality of wars when our grandparents were children were different than those of happening now. For example, my grandmother lost both of her parents, the worst thing that could have happened to a child, to the Second World War, the most terrifying event of twentieth century, the bad effects of which, unfotunately, were seen by our grandparents when they were kids.
Finally, according to the previous points, I think that kids of these times weren't able to be kids in understanding of present time. World was difficult to survive, cruel, and full of terrors during the time when our grandparents were children. Also, at that times world was full of prejudice and not tolerant at all. But children now are able to have fun, live their carefree lives as they want.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, moreover, second, so, thus, while, as for, for example, i think, of course, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 15.1003584229 139% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 9.8082437276 31% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 13.8261648746 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 11.0286738351 127% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 43.0788530466 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 52.1666666667 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.0752688172 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1468.0 1977.66487455 74% => OK
No of words: 300.0 407.700716846 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89333333333 4.8611393121 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16179145029 4.48103885553 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74198630356 2.67179642975 103% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 212.727598566 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.55 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 441.0 618.680645161 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 4.0 3.08781362007 130% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 6.0 1.86738351254 321% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.94265232975 121% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 20.6003584229 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.1344086022 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 91.5202665188 48.9658058833 187% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.857142857 100.406767564 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.4285714286 20.6045352989 104% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 5.45110844103 168% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.85842293907 130% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.88709677419 82% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215261836765 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0823471412025 0.076458572812 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.074266359683 0.0737576698707 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141839676375 0.150856017488 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0469624265495 0.0645574589148 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 11.7677419355 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.1575268817 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 10.9000537634 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.01818996416 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 86.8835125448 63% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.0537634409 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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