The world's natural resources such as oil, forest and fresh water are being consumed at an ever-increasing rate. What are the danger of this situation? What can be done to solve the problem?
It irrefutable that the consumption of natural resources has increasingly higher at alarming-rate. By overusing fossil fuel, water, and keep cutting trees, human beings put the earth and themself into a hazardous situation. Nevertheless, some viable solutions are adopted by both governments and individuals to tackle these environmental problems.
In this day and age, the rate of petroleum usage is totally frightening, which is caused by heavy industry and reliance on private vehicles of residents. Furthermore, deforestation results from unsustainable logging, which is deteriorating ecosystems. As a consequence, thousands of species are pushed into the brink of extinction as well as global warming caused by greenhouse gases. Besides, it is water overconsumption that causes freshwater to become a scarce commodity, meanwhile, a vast number of regions are plagued by drought. If such terrible trends continue, serious environmental, physical, and atmospheric conditions will result, affecting humanity in drastic ways.
In order to avert such a bleak future, some strict laws, and policies are expected to be imposed by the government. To begin with, The authority ought to implement limits on the usage of oil and encourage industrial companies and individuals to use renewable energies, such as solar panels, wind power. In addition to restricting using fossil fuels, the government should prohibit unnecessarily clearing forests and forces heavy fines on companies who overly misuse their power. Regarding water usage, Citizens ought to be educated and raised their awareness about the significance of water. Besides, by increasing the water fee, each individual would take more responsibilities for their actions, because it affects directly on their wallets.
To sum up, the negative impacts of humans on natural resources are undeniable. Therefore some measures should be implemented promptly by the government to protect our habitats.
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2020-05-26 | munmun0905 | 84 | view |
- The two maps illustrate the changes of a school campus from 1985 to 2012 33
- Human activities have negative effects on plant and animal species Some people think it is too late to do anything about this problem Others believe that effective measures can be taken to improve this situation Discuss both views and give your opinion 84
- Today the majority of children are raised by their grandparents due to the fact that their parents are busy working To what extent do you think it affects the whole family 89
- Some people think environment problems are too big for individuals to solve Others however think that those problems cannot be solved unless individuals take some action Discuss both views and give your own opinion 61
- Health services are basic necessity for a person Private companies have made the health services quite costly for ordinary individuals Do the advantage of private healthcare outweight its disadvantage 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 4, column 79, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
...ns on natural resources are undeniable. Therefore some measures should be implemented pro...
^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, if, nevertheless, regarding, so, therefore, well, while, in addition, such as, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.76206896552 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21486033782 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 194.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.668965517241 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.6180125374 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 111.4 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3333333333 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.13333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.177283517843 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0539195938258 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0489918069011 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100877953125 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0367880945599 0.056905535591 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.13 12.4159519038 130% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.06 8.58950901804 129% => OK
difficult_words: 119.0 78.4519038076 152% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.