It is thought by some that the upbringing of a child should be extended to other members of the family e.g aunt and uncle and so on, while others thought it not so. I am in support of the opinion that says, upbringing should be a joint family effort.
A family is an integral part of the society given to the fact that it makes up a society. If a child's upbringing is faulty,it could tell on the society in future. The upbringing of an individual greatly depends on the associates of such individuals. Joint family efforts will make a child rather than mar in the following ways.
Firstly, it allows for transparency. For instance, a child might be shy to communicate private things to his or her parent but due to the bond made with aunt ot uncle, he could talk to him like his school mate. Open up to aunt and tell out whatsoever bothers his mind. A news via talk true newspaper in 1999, told a story of how an aunt saved her nephew in the absence of his parents as a result of his confession of what he was about to do, little did she know he was to commit suicide.
Secondly, it allows for close monitoring, the parent might not always be around due to their search for ends meat, as a result to keep track of their children's deeds becomes difficult, but relations around will be able to suspect odds and try help to adjust, teach, criticize where necessary and help as demand arises.
Lastly, having relations around give them a sense of belonging and this will go a long way in keeping them informed about unity in a family,and help their relationship outside the home and even in the society at large.
In conclusion,I drop my pen here by saying, I agree with the thoughts that, having extended relations around is a massive help in a child's transparency, monitoring and having a sense of belonging.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, lastly, second, secondly, so, while, as to, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1490.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 332.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.48795180723 5.12529762239 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.2685907696 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56086455907 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55421686747 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 457.2 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 80.1953974686 49.4020404114 162% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.615384615 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5384615385 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.38461538462 7.06120827912 119% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176607203518 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0576401908996 0.084324248473 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0270480287802 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0759607204958 0.151304729494 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297090009691 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.06 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.78 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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