The bar graph gives information about the US university research students exploring six computer science subjects in 2011.
The bar graph gives information about the US university research students exploring six computer science subjects in 2011.
Overall,in this graph dominating male.There are four dominating numbers,which one of them is illustrated female and three of them showed male.Very small number displayed female in the mathematics computer science subject.In the natural sciences subject,there are two dominating numbers.
First one of this subjects is linguistics,where woman exhibited around 110,men demonstrated very small number only in this subject,it is about 78.How I said at the top there are three of the dominating numbers explained male,and first of this numbers we can see in the psychology.And one of the dominant number showed female,after this dominant number in the second place stand female of psychology.The natural sciences subject,there are two dominant numbers which exhibited 200,and this number is very high number in this table.
Fourth subject is engineering and there are we can see average numbers.Women explained almost similar number with male in the first subject. And the similar number demonstrated programming with engeneering 150.But in the programming subject women showed around 75.The last subject is mathematics,very small number illustrated female in this subject,the last dominating number 200 of male is in this subject.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21129257465 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.703260087 49.4020404114 295% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 230.8 106.682146367 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.0 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23109277372 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.261248654032 0.084324248473 310% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.370011690929 0.0667982634062 554% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312711624014 0.151304729494 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.397474645555 0.056905535591 698% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.7 13.0946893788 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 13.96 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.3 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.78 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
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...umber illustrated female in this subject,the last dominating number 200 of male is i...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, second, in the second place
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1154.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 200.0 315.596192385 63% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.77 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76060309309 4.20363070211 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.21129257465 2.80592935109 114% => OK
Unique words: 96.0 176.041082164 55% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.48 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 350.1 506.74238477 69% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 40.0 20.2975951904 197% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 145.703260087 49.4020404114 295% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 230.8 106.682146367 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 40.0 20.7667163134 193% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 21.0 5.01903807615 418% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23109277372 0.244688304435 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.261248654032 0.084324248473 310% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.370011690929 0.0667982634062 554% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.312711624014 0.151304729494 207% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.397474645555 0.056905535591 698% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.7 13.0946893788 196% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 13.96 50.2224549098 28% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 21.3 11.3001002004 188% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.78 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.09 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 21.0 9.78957915832 215% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 18.0 10.1190380762 178% => OK
text_standard: 21.0 10.7795591182 195% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.