In my country, young people have a better life today than their parents enjoyed when they were young
As the time passes, people seem to enjoy their life more than ever. Although some people thinks we live more miserable than older people, I am of the conviction that we are more pleased by the quality of our life than older generations for the following reasons.
First of all, youngsters receive more health treatments than older people. Many things have changed in the span of a few decades such as technology, transportation, most importantly healthcare system. For instance, in 1980's a number of people would die from minor diseases due to poor healthcare system. On the other hand, we are living in 2020 where vaccines, medicines and proper health treatment are available. This enables young people to have much longer life expectancy than older people who were born in 20th century.
Second, young people enjoy clean and safe environment compared to senior citizens. People were living in houses without necessary facilities. For example, in Mongolia people were living in Mongolian traditional yurts where no running water was accessible. It meant people could not shower or wash their hair without going to the public washroom. some might argue that not all the world's population live in clean facilities today. However, majority of the world's population live where clean water is available and abundant compared to the 20th century.
Last but not least, we get more leisure time than older generation. we live in a time where technology evolves rapidly. Most families today have a washing machine, a vacuum cleaner and a television. older people were occupied by doing chores all day and having no to little free time to spend. Conversely, our generation can do all household works quick and effortlessly with the help of items such as a dish wash and we could spend our free time by watching tv, surfing the internet and playing video games.
In conclusion, I believe youngsters enjoy life more than older people because they take advantage of technology to receive healthcare, live in clean environment, and spend their leisure time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, conversely, first, however, if, second, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.0286738351 63% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 43.0788530466 44% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 52.1666666667 69% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.0752688172 111% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1722.0 1977.66487455 87% => OK
No of words: 337.0 407.700716846 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10979228487 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28457229495 4.48103885553 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61808863128 2.67179642975 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 212.727598566 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557863501484 0.524837075471 106% => OK
syllable_count: 531.9 618.680645161 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 20.6003584229 92% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.1344086022 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 45.3052435922 48.9658058833 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.6315789474 100.406767564 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7368421053 20.6045352989 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.89473684211 5.45110844103 126% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.5376344086 181% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 11.8709677419 84% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.253041366401 0.236089414692 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0834909600531 0.076458572812 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0801808998523 0.0737576698707 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149696932422 0.150856017488 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0369795289241 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.5 11.7677419355 98% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 58.1214874552 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.1575268817 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 10.9000537634 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.27 8.01818996416 103% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 86.8835125448 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 10.002688172 80% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.0537634409 88% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.