Some people believe that government funding of the arts is necessary to ensure that the arts can flourish and be available to all people. Others believe that government funding of the arts threatens the integrity of the arts.
Write a response in which you discuss which view more closely aligns with your own position and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, you should address both of the views presented.
Τhe governmental financial support of the arts was always a controversial issue for the societies. Plenty of artists assert that the financial support of the governments is necessary in order the artists to have the adequate material equipment to create accordingly with their talent. On the other hand, a wide range of people support that the involvement of the governments in the promotion of arts would lead to censorship and a strict frame of art production. It is my personal belief that the governments should involve in the art production and with a responsible attitude to allocate the required fundamental financial support to promote the enhancement of the culture.
Indeed, many products of artists like paintings, statues and movies have been censored from governments which financially supported the creators. From the ancient times until our era, people in authority were keen on to control the artists and produce creations which would not doubt their power. For instance, the movie Ottoman Empire which had been produced by a Turkish producer under the governmental financial support, it does not make any reference on the end of the Ottoman Empire and all the events that happen and lead to the foundation of Turkey. On the other hand, the correspond novel, upon is based the movie, describes accurately all the historical facts with the violence and genocides of the Christians population in the area.
Though, a flourished art means an enhanced culture and of course the promotion of art and culture is one of the responsibilities of each government. That is that reason that in each government there is a Ministry of Culture which is responsible for the promotion of art and the cultivation of the culture. One of the field of responsibilities of this factor of governance is to make the art affordable for all the citizens of a country, independently of their financial situation. For instance, in Greece, the government budgets theatre productions which organized in ancient theatres like Epidaurus, in order all citizens to live this unique experience.
Moreover, many artist are living in poor conditions and they need the governmental economical support to be equipped with the necessary material equipment in order to produce their art. For example, in France, the government assist young producers to purchase all the equipment in order to produce their first movie.
To conclude, the financial support of arts was always a controversial issue as evolves aspects like the integrity of artist, yet it is considered that a responsible economical support is crucial for the promotion of art and the enhancement of culture.
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...omotion of arts would lead to censorship and a strict frame of art production. It...
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...romote the enhancement of the culture. Indeed, many products of artists like pa...
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...oundation of Turkey. On the other hand, the correspond novel, upon is based the movie, describ...
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...the Christians population in the area. Though, a flourished art means an enhanc...
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...tizens to live this unique experience. Moreover, many artist are living in poor...
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...in order to produce their first movie. To conclude, the financial support of ar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, first, moreover, so, for example, for instance, of course, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 19.5258426966 87% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 12.4196629213 32% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 14.8657303371 87% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 33.0505617978 67% => OK
Preposition: 73.0 58.6224719101 125% => OK
Nominalization: 26.0 12.9106741573 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2228.0 2235.4752809 100% => OK
No of words: 428.0 442.535393258 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20560747664 5.05705443957 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.548423998 4.55969084622 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.0203765443 2.79657885939 108% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 215.323595506 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.446261682243 0.4932671777 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 702.0 704.065955056 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 1.77640449438 56% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.38483146067 182% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 20.2370786517 74% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 23.0359550562 122% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 40.7670891229 60.3974514979 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 148.533333333 118.986275619 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5333333333 23.4991977007 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.93333333333 5.21951772744 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 10.2758426966 107% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.283626271227 0.243740707755 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.115583426231 0.0831039109588 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0746871812611 0.0758088955206 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.170901439091 0.150359130593 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0725985224668 0.0667264976115 109% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.4 14.1392134831 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.06 48.8420337079 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 12.1743820225 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.1639044944 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.38706741573 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 100.480337079 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 11.8971910112 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 11.2143820225 118% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.7820224719 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.