The blueprints will illustrate the complete variation observed in city stokeford city for the last eight decades that is from 1930 to 2000. The change is mainly observed in the sector of urbanization of city.
By observing the blueprint we can say the In older days the main livelihood of the people living in the city is farming so, the is mainly covered with farmlands in all the three directions of the city not only in three directions the most of land is covered by farmlands but, coming to the present situation in 2000 all farmland has vanished and they are converted into beautiful groups of houses with well-organized manner to provide better lifestyle by this people left farming and started doing another work for livelihood. This change has provided the city with a corporate look.
The post office which is located in the center of the city has got no changes. Another has not got any change is the bridges that connect the city to another side of the bank. Coming to another major thing primary school which is located opposite to the city post office has extended two blocks in north-south directions which will increase the building and infrastructure of the school. finally, the large house with a big garden which is located in the southeast part of the city has changed into a retirement house with a small garden and some houses beside the road in front of the building.
The entire transformation of the city has provided stunning beauty to the city. The transformation has converted the look of the city from rural to a city with a well-organized manner. This shows that stokeford city population is adapting to the latest world development.
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- Most people in the world have to work to earn a living However many people work only for the financial gain that it involves and not for any other rewards that a job can offer what do u think the main considerations when deciding what job to take should b 71
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 456, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...d manner to provide better lifestyle by this people left farming and started doing a...
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Line 3, column 388, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Finally
...lding and infrastructure of the school. finally, the large house with a big garden whic...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.0 157% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 33.7804878049 139% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 3.97073170732 201% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 965.302439024 143% => OK
No of words: 287.0 196.424390244 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.82229965157 4.92477711251 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 3.73543355544 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6934135972 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 106.607317073 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.473867595819 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 426.6 283.868780488 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 26.0 22.4926829268 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 129.115874667 43.030603864 300% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 125.818181818 112.824112599 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0909090909 22.9334400587 114% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90909090909 5.23603664747 56% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0420829360671 0.215688989381 20% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0216825955048 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0318421357131 0.0843802449381 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0367843873581 0.15604864568 24% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0292204700943 0.0819641961636 36% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.2329268293 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.55 61.2550243902 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 10.3012195122 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.01 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 40.7170731707 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.4329268293 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.9970731707 113% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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