In some countries an increasing number of people are suffering from health problems as a result of eating
too much fast food. It is therefore necessary for governments to impose a higher
tax in this food.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?
Nowadays, in many countries, a great deal of people, consuming excessive amount of junk food, have health issues, and therefore, some argue that the officials should address the problem by imposing a tax. I believe that although unhealthy food has a negative influence on people, the authorities should not impose a tax on it in order to avoid unintended consequences.
Fast food, which is accepted as one of the most inexpensive meal, has a adverse impact on the health of the whole nations. The reason behind is it contains additives and
artificial substances which commonly lead to chronic diseases such as obesity and blood pressure. As an example, almost one-third of population in the world are
suffering from overweighting as a result of junk food. Therefore, it seems that if governments impose a tax on it, people would embark healthy diets and lifestyles.
In contrary, imposing a tax on fast food by governments could create another or even more serious problem, such as starvation. Middle-class societies cannot afford organic meals so that
they are consuming fast food in order to survive. For instance, in developing countries, where the average salary is low, individuals avoid purchasing food which is
out of their budgets. As long as the authorities impose a tax on fast food, that people would be liable to be starving, not mentioned to having unhealthy diets.
In conclusion, despite influencing negatively on people's health, junk food is the key for tackling the problem of starvation. Therefore, I believe that governments
should not impose a tax on junk food, but rather make healthy meal more affordable.
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Suggestion: an
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, so, therefore, third, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1992481203 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92374151698 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.56015037594 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.483518639 49.4020404114 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 115.25 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.66666666667 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 9.0 4.38176352705 205% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284308185647 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.110571278598 0.084324248473 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0473171719118 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125465298116 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0508656291583 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.88 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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