All over the world, societies are facing a growing problem with obesity. This problem affects both children and adults. What are the reasons for this rise in obesity? How could it be tackled?
Nowadays, obesity has posed a danger, affecting both adults and children. It is commonly believed that obese people tend to have problems in metabolism. In this essay, I will look at the main causes of overweight and proposed some solutions.
The primary reason of increasing obesity levels is that most people are eating immoderate portions of unhealthy food. It is common these days for people to order takeaway food or pick up a ready meal on a store. For example, in my home town, most adolescents are junk food addict who might be impeded by fatty plaque that might clog them. One of the most efficient forms of tackling the issue is that authorities must increase taxes on junk food and force people to cook more nutrients. Eventually, this actions lead people to eat healthier meals.
Another reason is that people’s lifestyle has become passive and they often hardly exercise at all. It is said that many cannot use a gym because it is much more expensive than in the past. For instance, in Tashkent, the average monthly fee to take part to the gym clubs starts at 300 thousand sums which alleviating the number of people using a gym. The problem could be addressed by spending more funding on sport facilities such as gyms that make inhabitants be excessively sporty.
To sum up, unhealthy food and sedentary lifestyle are the root causes of obesity. Governments should take steps to encourage nutritious food in people’s daily routine and popularity of sport in the countries as much as they can, otherwise it could be inevitable that no treatment will solve the current issue in the future.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, look, so, for example, for instance, such as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1342.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.88 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64842132924 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621818181818 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 422.1 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2654827918 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.8571428571 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.6428571429 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.21428571429 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170975012678 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0588708397567 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0433927475297 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102701755714 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0537821726085 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 13.0946893788 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.71 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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