Write about the following topic.
Most people are no interested in how their food has been produced. They only care about how much it it costs.
How true is this stament? What influences people when they buy food?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Unlike in the past when food was a rare source and its availability never meets all the human’s needs. Nowadays, there are plenty of food products and ways in which they can be produced. People in today’s society can have a number of choices to make depending on their backgrounds. Those choices are also affected by lots of elements.
With the rise of living standards, more and more people are able to earn more money than their requirements. They become more serious about their health and food intake. Moreover, the onward march of continuous industrial pesticides and fertilizers in the agriculture makes the process of producing food is more important.
On the other hand, families have financial difficulties or low income, which can’t help them to sustain their life, don not put food’s problems at the top of the agenda. In the same way, students living independently of their families tend to have the same way of thinking. All of these people have more concerned about whether there is enough food for them to survive than processes of things they take in.
The elements affecting consumers’ choices are not only prices labeled on goods. Appearances and ways in which food is advertised are also the key factors. People, especially children, are easily attracted by colorful and lovely things. For this reason, many companies try to design lots of characters from cartoon films to encourage their target customers. They also attempt to increase their product’s consumption by cooperating with famous people to help them advertise their goods. For example, we can easily come across the poster or short video of singer Hari Won with a can of Mirinda soft drink. That image is so popular that the consumer’s expenditure on this product rises significantly.
In conclusion, the decisions people made on food are impacted by the number of reasons depending on each of the customers’ background. These choices can be changed not only by prices but also by the surrounding environment.
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| 2020-06-02 | nguyenduchuy2705 | 78 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, for example, in conclusion, in the same way, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1683.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77619587647 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566666666667 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 516.6 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.3320497329 49.4020404114 61% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.5789473684 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3684210526 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.78947368421 7.06120827912 68% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.206428901889 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631101491144 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0523982271921 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116537523604 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0117174851775 0.056905535591 21% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.88 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 92.0 78.4519038076 117% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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