In the developed world, average life expectancy is increasing. What problems will this cause for individuals and society? Suggest some measures that could be taken to reduce the impact of ageing populations.
It is widely accepted that, in this era of modernization and industrialization, rising lifetime is an irreversible trend with economic and socio-political consequences. In this essay, I will elucidate the induced problems and pertinent solutions.
Apparently, aging populations pose a challenge to the fiscal and macroeconomic stability/sustainability of many societies. The number of people in retirement age is increasing, which makes national leaders to divert public money from education and infrastructure investment into programs which aid aged citizens. In other words, it could hurt the economic growth through increased government spending on pension, healthcare, and social benefits for the elderly. Furthermore, this trend could lead to reduces in the labor force and tax revenue when people retire.
Nonetheless, there are two viable strategies that policy-makers could consider to address troubles caused by population aging. Firstly, the governors should enact a gradual retirement scheme that allows older employees to work fewer hours yet remain longer in the labor force. This is regarded as the most viable solution to fiscal pressures due to population aging. Besides, if the first strategy does not work for those who have some problems including skills mismatch and health issues, the state could encourage them to engage in volunteering, care work including preparing meals, helping the disabled, and childcare.
In conclusion, population aging carries broad implications for communities in terms of economy and social benefits. It is of importance to implement a more gradual retirement policy and facilitate their involvement in unpaid work such as volunteerism.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, besides, first, firstly, furthermore, if, nonetheless, so, in conclusion, such as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1441.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 249.0 315.596192385 79% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.78714859438 5.12529762239 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.97237131171 4.20363070211 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.38020464693 2.80592935109 120% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.678714859438 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 451.8 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2427171443 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.083333333 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.75 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.08333333333 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196144453034 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0648483993748 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0381961388087 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100516118701 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0269813676857 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.2 13.0946893788 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 34.26 50.2224549098 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.5 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.3 12.4159519038 131% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.53 8.58950901804 123% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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