Many people think that fast food companies should not be allowed to advertise while others believe that all companies should have right to advertise. what is your opinion?
Although it is thought by some that advertisement of junk food ought to be banned, other people think that all industries are entitle to promote their products. In my opinion, I consider that there should be some level of restriction on promotional advertisement of fast food to mitigate the potential negative impact of these products on health.
On the one hand, people believe that fast food companies should not be permitted to publicize their food items to avoid critical health problems like diabetes, obesity, health diseases, gastrointestinal conditions and other. In other words, these days people specially children influenced by advertisements related to fast food meal that regularly comes amid kids tv programmes and lure kids and adolescents to buy these meals full of fat, sugar, salt and energy that adversely effect health condition. Furthermore, food industries never disclose the potentially harmful content of adulterants and preservatives in their fast food product and their influential advertisements of unhealthy product on television, on poster or billboard lure to buy wider range of viewers. For example, Coca-cola company grabbed attention of whole world by their refreshing mouth-watering advertisement without revealing the amount of sugar.
On the other hand, some people think that all companies have equal right to advertise their products to make public get well aware and to increase sale at exponential rate. For instance, wider group people get informed about new launched food product by tv commercial, newspaper advertisement and other. Moreover, marketing of fast food by advertisement is helpful for growth of company and employees benefits because company could shrink without advertisement aid and eventually employees can adversely affected by company's slow growth.
In my opinion, I believe that there should be some restrictions on junk food related marketing. Firstly, healthy items should be fully permitted to advertise such as, fruits and vegetables options as it will yearn people to buy these products instead of junk unhealthy items. Secondly, companies should reveal the content mixed in product to give full information about affect on health.
To conclude, while people may vary in their opinion, I consider that fast food companies should have effective restrictions on their advertisements by giving full permission to advertise healthy food items and mandatory listing of mixed content to tackle the health related conditions.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'entitled'.
Suggestion: entitled
...er people think that all industries are entitle to promote their products. In my opinio...
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Line 4, column 370, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'effect'?
Suggestion: effect
... product to give full information about affect on health. To conclude, while people may...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, may, moreover, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, such as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2111.0 1615.20841683 131% => OK
No of words: 379.0 315.596192385 120% => OK
Chars per words: 5.56992084433 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.41224685777 4.20363070211 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.99861312081 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 176.041082164 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509234828496 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 639.9 506.74238477 126% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 60.3100470498 49.4020404114 122% => OK
Chars per sentence: 162.384615385 106.682146367 152% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.1538461538 20.7667163134 140% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.5384615385 7.06120827912 178% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.46077516968 0.244688304435 188% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.182369893252 0.084324248473 216% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689304709032 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.290847627622 0.151304729494 192% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0329308982027 0.056905535591 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 19.4 13.0946893788 148% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 50.2224549098 67% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 78.4519038076 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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