Some people believe it is better to raise children in the city, while others consider countryside to be a more suitable choice. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
For sometime, it has became a topic of discussion whereas, some set of people think urban area is superior place for children’s upbringing, others are in favors of countryside thus it offers more opportunity . In my opinion, I prefer that the metropolitan cities have numerous options available which will be helpful for adolescent in future life.
On the one hand, some people think that children who stay in big town, have a penalty of opportunities in life which helps them to be successful and I agree. In other words, cities offer state of the art facility for education which consequently produce better professionals. Moreover, they have many options available for them to pursue their studies in field of medicine, engineering or hospitality. For example, a recent survey conducted by the University of Mumbai, they say that 55% of students come from rural area for quality education since they have limited choices available. This is essential if someone wants to become successful in life.
On the other hand, it is often believed that small town has healthy life to offer since the environment is fresh and far from population. As a parent they feel their child should grow in a fresh air and closer to the nature so the baby will be healthy. Without which will have negative impact on children while growing. For instance, according to the WHO report they say 65% of children are more physical healthier compare to city child while they have pollutant free food and living in fresh air.
In conclusion, while people have different opinion, I believe that adolescents have plethora of opportunity for future life if they are raised in city.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, if, moreover, so, thus, whereas, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1383.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99277978339 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72739923529 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 159.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.574007220217 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 444.6 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.0603897853 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 115.25 106.682146367 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.0833333333 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.0 7.06120827912 170% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.194467483023 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0732113735206 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519964153214 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134462017682 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0360987076164 0.056905535591 63% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.96 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.77 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.