Nowadays shopping has become a new favorite pastime for young people. What are the reasons for this? should they be encouraged to develop other hobbies?
Over the last few years, shopping has become the most preferred hobby amid youngsters compared to older generation. there are numerous reasons behind this trend that include peer influences, surge in spending power and lucrative sales offers and services provided by shopping outlets. In my opinion, I consider that young people should persuade to occupy their valuable time in productive way to gain some beneficial skills or to attain expertise in sports or craft.
To begin with, there are several reasons attributed to the shopping habit as a leisure activity. Firstly, nowadays, young generation are getting attractive pay scale due to excellent job market. young people, therefore, feel pleasure to spend their precious time in shopping without thinking about the expense. Secondly, people are getting lured by massive discount offers and amazing leisure facilities offered by shopping malls and big supermarkets. For example, buy one get one free, half price offer and lots other appealing sales offers, yearn people to spend racklessly. Thirdly, people get highly influenced by shopping habit of their friends and family members. For instance, if parents often go for shopping with their children and spend massive amount of money unnecessarily, then, this particular habit of overspending prompt kids later in their life.
Nevertheless, shopping is becoming tremendously popular among young people, it is also surprisingly persuading the irresponsible behaviour of extravagancy that could adversely affect people budget or left them in huge debt as well. Furthermore, shopping is absolutely misuse of ample amout of valuable time on unnecessary shopping. Youth, therefore, should be motivated to spend their extra time on some other useful activites like reading books, sports, crafts and others. Moreover, people can use their time to gain some extra professional skills that would be helpful for their career build up. To illustrate, people from I T field can go for computer language courses to upgrade their knowledge and professional profile instead of wasting time on useless shopping.
To conclude, people are getting leisurely addicted to needless shopping that could eventually affect their bank balance and savings. To mitigate the issues related to shopping habit, youngsters ought to be encouraged to spend their precious time in sport and other activities that could have some positive outcomes.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, nevertheless, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, third, thirdly, well, for example, for instance, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2060.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 371.0 315.596192385 118% => OK
Chars per words: 5.5525606469 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73280805058 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 225.0 176.041082164 128% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606469002695 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 631.8 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.8267378353 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.176470588 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8235294118 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.8235294118 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.251683916253 0.244688304435 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0795197442702 0.084324248473 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0256834819469 0.0667982634062 38% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.153002733693 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0253741167236 0.056905535591 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 111.0 78.4519038076 141% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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