You have organized to go on holiday with your friend. However, you must change your plans. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
Tell how much you are looking forward to the holiday.
Explain why you must change your plan
Suggest an alternative arrangement
Dear William,
I hope this letter finds you in good health. It’s been so long since we last met each other. I am writing this letter to let you know about some changes in the plan of the excursion to Sydney which is scheduled for the next month.
I have been anticipating for the last 2 months about our trip. Due to this excitement, I have not only bought sports accessories but also new clothes for every occasion. Besides this, if we go there, it would be a wonderful recreational trip as I am eagerly waiting for this time.
As you know, I have been promoted as a Branch Head and for further training, my manager has recommended my name to the HR department. Unfortunately, the HR department has given the schedule which is clashing/crossing paths with our planned dates for holidays and these are the compulsory sessions which I ought to attend. Owing to this fact, I am in melancholy/low spirited that we have to defer this decision until the next available date.
Wouldn’t you mind, if we can visit there in the first week of August? An apology about the changes in plan and I’m sure you will not only understand my position but also enjoy this alternate plan.
I look forward to having a great holiday with you.
Best Wishes
Julian
Vocabulary-
melancholy- a feeling of pensive sadness, typically with no obvious cause.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 18, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Melancholy
...Best Wishes Julian Vocabulary- melancholy- a feeling of pensive sadness, typicall...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, if, look, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 32.9175257732 112% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1125.0 937.175257732 120% => OK
No of words: 236.0 206.0 115% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76694915254 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91947592106 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7459032973 2.54303337028 108% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 127.690721649 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639830508475 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.5377132524 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.5384615385 76.5299724578 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1538461538 16.8248392259 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.29896907216 140% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.199022713674 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828071737814 0.0766984524023 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0871145109596 0.0603063233224 144% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13356742421 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.101344774044 0.0580467560999 175% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.09 8.71597938144 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 7.59969072165 101% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 41.2886597938 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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