The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and 2010. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given two map illusturate the road network around a City Hospital in 2007 ans 2010.Thia map has some change that were made to City Hospital’s transport in 3 years.It is noticable that there main modifications were made to Hospital’s vehicle access.These involved the building of a new bus station,new roundabouds,new car parking facilities.
Looking at the changes in more detail,we can see that in 2007 there were three bus stop on either side of Hospital Road.There were no longer present in 2010 and insead we see the addition of a bus station on the west side and ther oposite side located staff car park.This bus station accessed via two roundabouts; the frist roundabout is at the intersection of city road and Hospital Road,while the second is at other end of the Hospital Road and accessed via ring road.
The two map also show that changes were made to public and staff car parking area.In 2007, staff and visitor used the same parking which was situated to east of the Hospital Road and accessed via the ring road .
However, by 2010 this original car park had become a designated area for staff parking only.A new car park located on the east side of the ring road provided parking for members of public.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'map' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'maps'.
Suggestion: maps
The given two map illusturate the road network around a C...
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Suggestion: Thia
...around a City Hospital in 2007 ans 2010.Thia map has some change that were made to C...
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Suggestion: It
...to City Hospital’s transport in 3 years.It is noticable that there main modificati...
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...in modifications were made to Hospital’s vehicle access.These involved the buildi...
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Suggestion: These
...were made to Hospital’s vehicle access.These involved the building of a new bus stat...
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...volved the building of a new bus station,new roundabouds,new car parking facilities....
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...ing of a new bus station,new roundabouds,new car parking facilities. Looking at the...
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...n see that in 2007 there were three bus stop on either side of Hospital Road.There w...
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...her oposite side located staff car park.This bus station accessed via two roundabout...
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...oundabout is at the intersection of city road and Hospital Road,while the second ...
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...de to public and staff car parking area.In 2007, staff and visitor used the same p...
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...ital Road and accessed via the ring road . However, by 2010 this original car par...
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... designated area for staff parking only.A new car park located on the east side o...
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...ocated on the east side of the ring road provided parking for members of public. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, second, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1016.0 965.302439024 105% => OK
No of words: 212.0 196.424390244 108% => OK
Chars per words: 4.79245283019 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68165956506 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.518867924528 0.547539520022 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 307.8 283.868780488 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 53.0 22.4926829268 236% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 113.780490419 43.030603864 264% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 254.0 112.824112599 225% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 53.0 22.9334400587 231% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 10.5 5.23603664747 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 17.0 1.69756097561 1001% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236428336211 0.215688989381 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.156350055754 0.103423049105 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729612844698 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.156350055754 0.15604864568 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0729612844698 0.0819641961636 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.6 13.2329268293 209% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 26.14 61.2550243902 43% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 10.3012195122 221% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.39 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.32 8.06136585366 116% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 40.7170731707 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 11.4329268293 245% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 23.2 10.9970731707 211% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.0658536585 253% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.