With deforestation, urban development and illegal hunting, many animal species are becoming endangered and some are even facing extinction. Do you think it is important to protect animals? What can be done to deal with this problems?
Nowadays, myriad animal species are steeply alleviate due to the pertinent threat by human, such as poaching, developing cities, and doing deforestation. On the one hand, all of these actions lead to the verge of extinction. On the other hand, preserving animals is the most vital tactics in order to maintain the safety of endangered species. Furthermore, we can construct the national park or even the wildlife sanctuary to protect the endangered animals.
First of all, utilizing national park as a place to raise the animals is the most effective ways to overcome this issue. It also assist the animal with the suitable circumstance for them to breed and produce offspring in order to keep their existence. Moreover, the national park have a good facilities that can cover and fulfill their daily need and offer the best place by imitating the real habitat of each species, so they can remedy their situation. Hence, they they could seamlessly attain a luminous future.
Furthermore, wildlife sanctuary have a capability to foster the development of endangered species by soaring their ability to interact as well as adapt with another species which help them to have an overwhelming life. Another reason is the surveillance from the supervisor is one of the indispensable element that propel the endangered animals in order to extricate from the aforementioned threats.
In a nutshell, taking care of endangered animal species is essential to maintain the biodiversity in the world; for example, preserving animals and avoiding animal hunting can lead us to a better future.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: alleviated
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Message: Did you mean 'assists'?
Suggestion: assists
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Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'facility'?
Suggestion: facility
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: they
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, well, for example, such as, as well as, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 255.0 315.596192385 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.23137254902 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99608801488 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90795882519 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.560784313725 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 426.6 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1491095226 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.272727273 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1818181818 20.7667163134 112% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0909090909 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240616256515 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0828635077976 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0560250332438 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148865899051 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0400857829658 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 13.0946893788 113% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.35 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.