The graph gives information about the energy consumption in 2008 in the Usa making a prediction until 2030.
For what concerns nuclear,solar/wind and hydropower consumption in the period of time 1980-2010, apart for small rises or falls, remains constant and the projection for the future 30 years does not show significant changes.
Analyzing coal and natural gases, it is possible to notice that the first in the historical period 1980-2010, after an almost fixed consumption, will increase dramatically until 2030 reaching 25 quadrillion units having started from aproximately 15; the second one instead after a continuos fluctuation from 1980 to 2010,will remain constant in the future.
At the end the graph concentrates on petrol and oil showing that in future there will be a significant trend in their consumption reaching 50 quadrillion units, while in the past it started from 35 and fluctuated continously between 1980 and 2000, starting to rise from that year.
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The graph gives information about the energy consumption in 2008 in the Usa making a prediction until 2030.
The graph gives information about the energy consumption in 2008 in the Usa and makes a prediction until 2030.
Sentence: Analyzing coal and natural gases, it is possible to notice that the first in the historical period 1980-2010, after an almost fixed consumption, will increase dramatically until 2030 reaching 25 quadrillion units having started from aproximately 15; the second one instead after a continuos fluctuation from 1980 to 2010,will remain constant in the future.
Error: aproximately Suggestion: approximately
Sentence: At the end the graph concentrates on petrol and oil showing that in future there will be a significant trend in their consumption reaching 50 quadrillion units, while in the past it started from 35 and fluctuated continously between 1980 and 2000, starting to rise from that year.
Error: continously Suggestion: continuously
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Score: 6.0 out of 9
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