The process diagram illustrates the changes in the life of a honeybee. Overall, it takes 34-36 days for a honeybee to undergo changes. In the diagram it is evident that there are 5 stages in bee life, ranging from laying eggs to maturity.
To begin, the female bee lays 1 or 2 eggs every three days, furthermore the eggs are laid in segregated areas.
Next, is the hatching stage, however it takes about 9-10 days for its' eggs to be hatched.
Next, it is then transformed from an egg to a Nymph. This stage requires 5 days, summing up all the days of to this day, makes it 15 days of development.
At day 7, it developed to a young bee, which could be likened to a Nymph. Hence, the nymph mounts 3 times as it grows, which takes place at day 5,7 and 9 respectively.
At day 10, it emerges to a young adult there after, transforming changed to maturity, after 4 days of life, adding up to 35 days.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 11, column 40, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: thereafter
... At day 10, it emerges to a young adult there after, transforming changed to maturity, aft...
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Line 11, column 73, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... adult there after, transforming changed to maturity, after 4 days of life, addin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, hence, however, if, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 2.0 6.8 29% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 12.0 5.60731707317 214% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 29.0 33.7804878049 86% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 743.0 965.302439024 77% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.34502923977 4.92477711251 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51427986277 2.65546596893 95% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.608187134503 0.547539520022 111% => OK
syllable_count: 217.8 283.868780488 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 1.53170731707 326% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.6099535603 43.030603864 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 74.3 112.824112599 66% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1 22.9334400587 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.7 5.23603664747 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 3.83414634146 156% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 4.09268292683 220% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.117449264011 0.215688989381 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0621036944132 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0851626859513 0.0843802449381 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.064164410868 0.15604864568 41% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0818019412635 0.0819641961636 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 13.2329268293 57% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 79.6 61.2550243902 130% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 10.3012195122 62% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.65 11.4140731707 67% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 40.7170731707 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.4329268293 57% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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