Two bar chart illustrate information about the number of UK alumnus doing activities such as part-time work, voluntary work, further study and also unemployment graduate and postgraduate students in 2008.
The first figure shows that only a small number graduate students (3500) do voluntary works meanwhile further study among them is the most popular trend (29665 students). Furthermore, there is a marginal difference between the statistics of part-time work and unemployment figures.
In the second chart, doing voluntary work has the lowest place among other activities while further study and part time work by small amount of differences are the most popular activities. Also, the number of unemployment students is 1625 that is approximately 5 times more than the number students that do voluntary work.
By comparing two charts, it is obvious that both postgraduate and graduate students have the lowest tendency to be active in voluntary works and further study is the most important issue among them. The position of part-time work and unemployment also are similar in both charts but the number of graduate students in different fields are about 10-fold larger than postgraduate students except the number of part-time working students that are approximately 8 times larger than postgraduate ones.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 111, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled with hyphen.
Suggestion: part-time
...ther activities while further study and part time work by small amount of differences are...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, while, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 32.9175257732 24% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1114.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 203.0 206.0 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.48768472906 4.54256449028 121% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85909564657 2.54303337028 112% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 127.690721649 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.502463054187 0.622605031667 81% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 335.7 290.88556701 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.41237113402 120% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 9.13402061856 11% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 16.3608247423 177% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.771033371 44.8134815571 124% => OK
Chars per sentence: 159.142857143 76.5299724578 208% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 29.0 16.8248392259 172% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.71428571429 4.34317383033 201% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192097238317 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.111687830836 0.0766984524023 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0519304374288 0.0603063233224 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150042899146 0.12726935374 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0446405251654 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 8.37731958763 226% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 33.58 70.7449484536 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 3.82989690722 292% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 7.45979381443 212% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 15.15 8.71597938144 174% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.56 7.59969072165 99% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 41.2886597938 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 8.62886597938 174% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 8.54432989691 159% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 8.15463917526 196% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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