Dear Rakesh,
I hope this letter find you in the best of spirits. I am writing this letter to inform you about my change in plans to pay a visit to Canada.
Although I have arranged everything as per the schedule and I even have a valid visa to travel, I am afraid my trip has to be postponed because of family commitments. My brother family has been blessed with a baby boy and I must look after a few family works such as receiving guests, while he occupied with formalities at the hospital.
It would be wonderful to see you after so long and I really wanted to meet you as much as you do, however, not this time. Hopefully, when you hear my excuse you will forgive me.
My visa would be acceptable for couple of years. I am planning to come to Canada next month and I can stay for 2 weeks, please do let me know if this works for you. I will find a suitable time for both of us otherwise.
See you soon.
Regards
Sudheerkumar Motakatla
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, look, really, so, while, as to, such as, i am afraid
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 776.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.26373626374 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.42110133512 2.54303337028 95% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.631868131868 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.1025394846 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.5454545455 76.5299724578 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.90909090909 4.34317383033 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215600363863 0.216113520407 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0837082597333 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0591648076302 0.0603063233224 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.106159942597 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0772263576317 0.0580467560999 133% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 8.37731958763 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.13 8.71597938144 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.03 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.