Many people use written language in a less formal way and in a relaxed way than in the past.
Why is that so? Does this development have more advantages or disadvantages?
Nowadays, people are using a more informal style for their writing which is probably due to hardship of the formal language. Moreover, since people usually speak rather than write in everyday conversations, the informal style is easier to use. This essay discuss the advantages and the disadvantages of these two different styles of writing.
One important advantages in a more relax manner is that many people are more dominant on it, in comparison to the formal style. For example children and the people who are not educated at a university, especially in the postgraduate grades. Another positive point is that most of the people who are new learners of the language, i.e. the foreigners, certainly can read and write the relax style superior to the formal style. For instance, the turists who are coming to a country to visit it, will be more comfortable if the informal style is accepted for writing in that country.
On the other hand, using a simple style for writing, may has some disadvantages as well. Firstly, the informal writing style may considered not attractive for many uses. One example is the literature books, which are not attractive and effective, if they do not contain complex and formal structures and vocabularies. Furthurmore, an informal writing does not seem serious for the audiances. For example consider a letter that is recieved by someone who is in charge of a big company which is in regard to the company’s problems. He/she will not consider it a serious issue, if its style is not formal and serious.
To conclude, although both of the formal and informal styles of writing have some advantages and disadvantages, from the author’s point of view, the disadvantages of the informal writing style are more than the advantages due to more serious, attractive and politeness of the formal style.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 256, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Possible agreement error - use third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'discusses'.
Suggestion: discusses
...rmal style is easier to use. This essay discuss the advantages and the disadvantages of...
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Line 2, column 379, Rule ID: A_INFINITVE[1]
Message: Probably a wrong construction: a/the + infinitive
...oreigners, certainly can read and write the relax style superior to the formal style. For...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, may, moreover, so, well, for example, for instance, in regard to, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 41.998997996 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1534.0 1615.20841683 95% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.02950819672 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84748765959 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 143.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.468852459016 0.561755894193 83% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.0544415665 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 109.571428571 106.682146367 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.7857142857 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.181537534597 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0755026355957 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0622663486069 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135528892882 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0428401207552 0.056905535591 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.04 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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