SOME PEOPLE BELIEVE THAT IT IS BEST TO ACCEPT A BAD SITUATION, SUCH AS AN UNSATISFACTORY JOB OR SHORTAGE OF MONEY. OTHERS ARGUE THAT IT IS BETTER TO TRY AND IMPROVE SUCH SITUATION.
DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OWN OPINION.
SOME STATES THAT IT IS BETTER TO ACCEPT UNSATISFACTORY JOB OR POVERTY, WHILE OTHERS BELIEVE THAT ONE SHOULD TRY TO IMPROVE SUCH SITUATION WITH A VIEW TO ENSURING BETTERMENT. IN MY OPINION, EVERYONE SHOULD TRY HEART AND SOUL IN ORDER TO PROMOTE HIS CURRENT STATUS.
ON THE ONE HAND, PEOPLE LIVING AT VARIOUS PARTS OF THE WORLD ARE ALWAYS STRUGGLING WITH THEIR OWN LIFE AND IT IS SOMETIMES DIFFICULT FOR THEM TO EVADE FROM WHERE THEY ARE. THE REASON IS MAYBE THEY ARE FROM A WAR TORN AREA OR THEY ARE DEPRIVED OF THEIR AMENITIES SUCH AS EDUCATION, TRANSPORTATION, FOOD OR EVEN FRESHWATER. FOR EXAMPLE, MAJORITY OF INHABITANTS LIVING IN GHANA DEPENDS ON RAINWATER AS THEY HAVE TO COVER ALMOST 20 KILOMETER DAILY IN ORDER TO REACH THE NEAREST WATER SOURCE. IT MIGHT BE POSSIBLE FOR MEN, BUT NOT FOR PREGNANT WOMEN, OLD PEOPLE OR CHILDREN. AND AS A MATTER OF FACT, IT IS HIGH TIME FOR THEM TO ACCEPT WHERE THEY ARE AS THINKING OF A COMFORTABLE LIFE IS NOTHING BUT A DREAM IN SUCH CIRCUMSTANCE.
IN CONTRAST, PEOPLE, WHO DO NOT FACE DIFFICULTY IN ENJOYING BASIC RIGHTS, SHOULD TRY THEIR BEST AS DEVELOPMENT OF ONE AS WELL AS ONE’S TERRRITORY IS IMPROBABLE WITHOUT HARD WORK. IF THEY DO SO, THEY WILL BE ABLE TO LEAD A PROSPEROUS LIFE AND AS A RESULT, THEIR HOMELAND WILL EVEVATE THEIR POSITION AND PLAY A VITAL ROLE IN WORLD POLITICS AS WELL AS HUMANITARIAN AID. FOR INSTANCE, THINK OF GERMANY AFTER SECOND WORLD WAR AS MOST OF THE MAJOR CITIES WERE DILAPIDATED AT THAT TIME, BUT WITHIN A VERY SHORT TIME FRAME GERMANS RETAIN THEIR POSITION AS A DEVELOPED NATION. HENCE, BECOME A COMPETITOR OF AMERICANS, WINNER OF THAT WAR, ONLY BY DINT OF DILIGENCE. SO, EVERYBODY SHOULD TRY TO UPLIFT THEIR LIVING STATUS AS WE, HUMAN BEING, ARE BETTER THAN ANY OTHER CREATION AND THERE IS NO DIGNITY IN ACCEPTING A MISERABLE LIFE.
IN CONCLUSION, I BELIEVE THAT WE HAVE TO CREATE A BETTER FUTURE INSTEAD OF ACCEPTING PRESENT SITUATION AS THROUGH THIS WAY WE WILL BE ABLE TO ENSURE A BETTER FUTURE FOR US ALONG WITH OUR CHILDREN.
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Essay evaluations by e-grader
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64245810056 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62202286436 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569832402235 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.7890889269 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.846153846 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5384615385 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180722760359 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669994017873 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10224673544 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136920925772 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112762563208 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, may, second, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, such as, as a matter of fact, as a result, as well as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 24.0651302605 141% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1662.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 358.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 4.64245810056 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34981470047 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62202286436 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569832402235 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 536.4 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 39.7890889269 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.846153846 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.5384615385 20.7667163134 133% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0 7.06120827912 184% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180722760359 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0669994017873 0.084324248473 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.10224673544 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136920925772 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112762563208 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.93 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 110.0 78.4519038076 140% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.