Since time immemorial it is a common practice to exchange merchandise among the nations. However, due to globalization, this trend has been skyrocketing for the past few decades. While few experts believe that grocery stores can sell a mixture of both foreign and domestic staples, others are in favor of vend products only from local farmers. In my opinion, although there might be one or two advantages by buying in from other countries, supermarkets should focus more and more on promoting native eats.
There is a multitude of reasons why the government is allocating an astronomical amount of funds. the First point to be highlighted is related to an unknown illness. Some of the diseases such has Covid-19, MERS, and SARS, etc. attack humans without notice, and in no time, everybody would face the consequences. Thus, to confront pandemics, epidemics the authorities have to release sufficient funds. Moreover, it is not possible for the both middle and the lower-income groups to bear the medical expenses of various chronicle issues including Cancer, Diabetics. Therefore, the health ministry of a regime has to provide some amount in its annual budget for health insurance.
However, as the idiom goes “prevention is better than cure”, health professionals are claiming that there is a plethora of advantages with primary precautions and health education. The first point worth mentioning is associated with personal hygiene. To elaborate on this, each and every individual has to take the utmost care of their personal cleanliness such as washing hands, maintaining tidy surroundings to name but a few. In addition to that, the authorities have to run health awareness camps on both physical and mental health at regular intervals to educate and explain the importance of wellbeing.
To conclude, even though there are few minor benefits in selling other territory edibles, vendors should focus more on selling local crops for several good reasons for instance growth in the economy, leading a healthy lifestyle.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Since” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
Since time immemorial it is a common practice...
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Line 2, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re and more on promoting native eats. There is a multitude of reasons why the ...
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Line 3, column 99, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
...cating an astronomical amount of funds. the First point to be highlighted is relate...
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Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: SOME_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'some'.
Suggestion: Some
...ghted is related to an unknown illness. Some of the diseases such has Covid-19, MERS, and S...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ts annual budget for health insurance. However, as the idiom goes “prevention i...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d explain the importance of wellbeing. To conclude, even though there are few m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, thus, well, while, as to, for instance, in addition, such as, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 10.0 24.0651302605 42% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1716.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31269349845 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88347837948 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 206.0 176.041082164 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.637770897833 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 534.6 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.796122822 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.25 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.1875 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.8125 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0815430001134 0.244688304435 33% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0234498569049 0.084324248473 28% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0371445087594 0.0667982634062 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0413330275151 0.151304729494 27% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0436534730976 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.71 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 78.4519038076 133% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.