Some people say that parents have the most significant influence in a child's development. However, others say that things like television or friends have the most important influence on them.
Discuss both view and give your opinion.
It is said that parents are the first teachers of the child in life and so they seem to have the maximum influence on their children's life. However, some argue that these days, children are under higher influence of friends and television. It seems to me that parents' influence outweighs other factors in the development of the offspring.
There are many reasons why parents impact is very high on children. To initiate, parents are the first human contact to any child, Henceforth, their words, emotions, behavior,culture and lifestyle shape the personality traits of the kid. This happens so because the child's mind is like a plain canvas. whatever is printed on painted on it stays there for a lifetime. moreover, the child's first word, first steps, first tears and first smile happen happen in front of his parents. he or she learns how to see the world with the help of his parents and so their influence is bound to be the highest.
On the other hand, some say factors like friends and television have stronger influence on children's mind. they say that after a certain age, children pay more attention to their friends and spend more time watching television and playing with friends. They also say that friends and television are able to influence anyone's mind, and so, a child's tender mind is bound to be affected to a greater extent.
Conclusively, it is true that impact of TV and friends can be more at times in some cases. However, i firmly believe that parents' influence is the strongest on any child's mind compare to any other person or media.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, however, if, moreover, so, in some cases, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1297.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78597785978 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5323871293 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 176.041082164 79% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.512915129151 0.561755894193 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 383.4 506.74238477 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.9371193416 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.6428571429 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.3571428571 20.7667163134 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.5 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.268338850166 0.244688304435 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0995657245206 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086118517319 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.173547795779 0.151304729494 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0753367287363 0.056905535591 132% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 50.2224549098 138% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 11.3001002004 73% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.5 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.26 8.58950901804 85% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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