You are going to an English speaking country for some months.
write a letter to a rental agency. In your letter
- the type of house you want
- facilities you require
-for how long you need the accommodation
Dear Sir/Madam,
My name is Piyush Patel. I am writing this letter to seek information on the availability of accommodation in city center area. I got your your contact detail from internet where detail is mentioned that your agency is providing many accommodation option in that location.
I need a home stay from 1st of March for my 3 month stay. I think that would be sufficient for a single person. In addition, I would like to have all basic kitchenettes and good natural ventilation. It will be great help for me if Indian cook will be provided who have cooking experience in north Indian cousins.
At present I need a accommodation only for three months but, in case of a project will not completed in time then may be I have to stay few days more and I will intimate you well in advance if that happen. Please make sure that extension is possible in provided property.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours Faithfully,
Piyush Patel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 135, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: your
...ccommodation in city center area. I got your your contact detail from internet where deta...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...commodation option in that location. I need a home stay from 1st of March for ...
^
Line 5, column 59, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... from 1st of March for my 3 month stay. I think that would be sufficient for a si...
^
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... like to have all basic kitchenettes and good natural ventilation. It will be gre...
^^
Line 7, column 19, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...h Indian cousins. At present I need a accommodation only for three months but...
^
Line 7, column 92, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'complete'
Suggestion: complete
...nths but, in case of a project will not completed in time then may be I have to stay few ...
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Line 7, column 115, Rule ID: MAY_BE[1]
Message: Did you mean 'maybe' (=perhaps)?
Suggestion: maybe
...project will not completed in time then may be I have to stay few days more and I will...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, may, so, then, well, i think, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 25.0 32.9175257732 76% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 798.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72189349112 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7686617531 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.662721893491 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.7632651719 44.8134815571 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 72.5454545455 76.5299724578 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.3636363636 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.09090909091 4.34317383033 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208368736771 0.216113520407 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0665060684691 0.0766984524023 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0553784471886 0.0603063233224 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124263721757 0.12726935374 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0289164081142 0.0580467560999 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.5 8.37731958763 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.5 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.46 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 8.62886597938 81% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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