You participated in a sports event as a team member in foreign country. Now you have come back to your home country and you want to recommend the same activity to your friend.
write a letter to your friend. In your letter
describe the activities you did there
provide details about the facilities given to you
give reasons why you recommend this activity to your friend
Dear Samir,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health and spirit. You know that, I have taken part in a cricket tournament last year in Delhi. It was great experience by evolving that event, I have played as wicket keeping batsman. I enjoyed lot in practice session and improved my bating techniques.
I want you to also take part in that event that are again going to organize in next month as you are a fond of cricket and a good bowler as well. Organizers will provide you the cricketing kit and a free of cost practice session with international experts.
This tournament will enhance your cricket in terms of temperament. Moreover, you will learn ball swinging techniques that will improve you bowling at death overs that will open a door for national team for you.
If you need further assistance for participation formalities contact me on my mobile
Yours,
Piyush
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 93, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to ball'
Suggestion: to ball
...f temperament. Moreover, you will learn ball swinging techniques that will improve y...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, moreover, so, well, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.48453608247 40% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 750.0 937.175257732 80% => OK
No of words: 156.0 206.0 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80769230769 4.54256449028 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.53411884305 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62300924794 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 127.690721649 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.2007792555 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.3333333333 76.5299724578 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3333333333 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 4.34317383033 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282528420001 0.216113520407 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108296969345 0.0766984524023 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0663526615816 0.0603063233224 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163704659956 0.12726935374 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0376307225312 0.0580467560999 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 8.37731958763 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.32 8.71597938144 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.33 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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