Some say that the government should stop supporting the professional sports activities and the cultural performances, and instead begin supporting schools to encourage children to take up sports and arts.
discuss and give us your opinion
Adequate attention to sports and cultural activities apart from academics is essential for the all round development of children. Several people believe that government should encourage schools to instead of individual. I agree with the notion that schools should play important role towards sport and tradition in children's life.
In this era, All nations are interested to win the global sports events like Olympics and World championships. To do so government paying attentions to the sports professional by providing infrastructure and finance. Furthermore, to enhance the traditional performances government spend huge amount to individuals by setting a professional academy and encourages people to perform better in cultural events and win the medal for nation in sports event. For instance, Indian government build a sports and culture academy at Delhi for professional who performed well at state level.
However, a group of people think that authorities should support the schools to take up sports and traditional activity in their syllabus. By doing this, all children would get a chance to build a career in sports and cultural activities. Moreover, hidden capabilities can be grown further to international level. In addition, it is easy to prepare a child from childhood by encouraging to take part in this kind of extra curricular activities. It will save cultural tradition remains in society for longer time and help society in better way. For example, Australia government spent huge budget towards schools after 2008 Olympic to save tradition and sports.
To recapitulate, I believe that improvising schools curriculum has more benefits to the society. However, to provide a international level infrastructure to the good performer government can spend limited amount.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'performances'' or 'performance's'?
Suggestion: performances'; performance's
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Suggestion:
...ormances government spend huge amount to individuals by setting a professional ac...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, well, apart from, for example, for instance, in addition, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1524.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 274.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56204379562 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0685311056 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09721369904 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.57299270073 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.5569027523 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.6 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2666666667 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.321723859455 0.244688304435 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105288451733 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0722498551507 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.186553188833 0.151304729494 123% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0737733402467 0.056905535591 130% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.56 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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