You recently stayed in hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of the year and the heating/cooling system in the hotel was quite inadequate.
Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter.
- give detail of what was wrong
-explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at that time.
-say what action you would like the manager to take
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in connection with the unusual experience that I have faced during recent stay at Your Goa beach hotel, I have been stayed there from 21st March to 24th March and allotted room was on top floor of the hotel.
My stay was not as expected like earlier Stay as this time the air conditioning system was not working in my room. I have complaint twice but technician could not able to repair it because of the unavailability of the spares that are not available in inventory. I am unable to sleep well in humid night. I had to open the windows of the room to overcome the issue but indeed it was very noisy.
I request you to keep minimum spares of air conditioners so that it can be replaced easily and guest do not have to suffer in the humid and hot environment at this coastal area. Moreover, providing table fan would be the good option in this situation.
I look forward to hearing from you.
Yours faithfully,
Piyush Patel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 154, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...oa beach hotel, I have been stayed there from 21st March to 24th March and allot...
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Line 3, column 189, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...there from 21st March to 24th March and allotted room was on top floor of the ho...
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Line 5, column 132, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...not working in my room. I have complaint twice but technician could not able to r...
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Line 5, column 306, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...am unable to sleep well in humid night. I had to open the windows of the room to ...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... issue but indeed it was very noisy. I request you to keep minimum spares of a...
^
Line 13, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ou. Yours faithfully, Piyush Patel
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, look, moreover, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 178.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50561797753 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65262427087 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46495446307 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634831460674 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 69.070012789 44.8134815571 154% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1111111111 76.5299724578 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7777777778 16.8248392259 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.22222222222 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236330668644 0.216113520407 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0715895637298 0.0766984524023 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0882904480849 0.0603063233224 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117992529385 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100772454824 0.0580467560999 174% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.7 8.37731958763 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 70.7449484536 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 7.45979381443 111% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.88 8.71597938144 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.95 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 38.0 41.2886597938 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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