You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an
accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to
him in hospital, telling him about the match.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter,
• tell him which team won
• describe the conditions on the day
• say how you felt about the match
Dear Samir,
I hope this letter finds you in the best of your health and spirit. I was so sorry to hear about your accident. I hope you are filling better now at your home.
I'm writing you to inform you that we have won the last cricket match against the Gandhinagar team. It was quite interesting match as the opponent was also played well but we managed our victory by tremendous performance by our tail enders.
The atmosphere at the stadium was so energetic as it is full of our and opponent's supporters such that even we couldn't able to hear the team member's voice at the ground. The weather was very sunny, and moisture was not expected by us but unexpectedly, weather became cloudy and due came on the pitch in second half of the match.
All the team members really exited after the win as we are now qualified for the state level tournaments. It was nice filling at the end. Get well soon and hoping to see you soon at the ground in next match.
Yours truly,
Piyush
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 113, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...s so sorry to hear about your accident. I hope you are filling better now at your...
^
Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...are filling better now at your home. Im writing you to inform you that we have ...
^^
Line 7, column 112, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
... opponents supporters such that even we couldnt able to hear the team members voice at ...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, really, second, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 4.92783505155 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 815.0 937.175257732 87% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.47802197802 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.31083642434 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 112.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.615384615385 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 241.2 290.88556701 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.1072363421 44.8134815571 110% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.0909090909 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5454545455 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.54545454545 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231277105079 0.216113520407 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0923969156891 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616182411244 0.0603063233224 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139451898186 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0553288052802 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.9 8.37731958763 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.41 8.71597938144 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.77 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 41.2886597938 65% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.