You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city The weather was very unusual for the time of the year and the heating cooling system in the hotel was quiet inadequate Write a letter to the manager of the hotel giving details of what was wrong Explain wh

Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing to you in connection with my stay at your esteemed hotel 'The Hilton' last week. My booking had been done for two nights and three days from 15th July till 17th July for an air-conditioned double-bedded room. I regret to say that the cooling system in the room was quite inadequate.

As you are aware that the temperature these days are very high, the cooling issue caused a lot of inconvenience to me. I had booked the room for attending a close friend's wedding in the city but I found difficulty living in the room. I contacted the reception to get the air-conditioner repaired, but they said that it would not be possible to be done for the next two days. Besides, when I asked for a transfer to another room, I was said that the hotel was fully booked. Unfortunately, I had to request my friend to help me with some accommodation where I could stay for the rest of the days.

In order to avoid such issues in the future, I would want you to keep a check on all equipment installed in your hotel rooms before and after a guest leaves/enters. In this way, the guest's comfort will not be affected by any haphazard.

I hope you will look into this matter seriously.

Yours faithfully,

Khushbu Solanki

Votes
Average: 7.3 (1 vote)
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, if, look, so

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 32.9175257732 97% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.54666666667 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76601598774 2.54303337028 109% => OK
Unique words: 139.0 127.690721649 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.617777777778 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 309.6 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 9.13402061856 109% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.3971152703 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.25 76.5299724578 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.75 16.8248392259 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.16666666667 4.34317383033 50% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20365156119 0.216113520407 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070366157703 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.07205481284 0.0603063233224 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.107312159968 0.12726935374 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0645843450819 0.0580467560999 111% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.4 8.37731958763 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 8.71597938144 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 7.59969072165 98% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 41.2886597938 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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