Shopping is a daily necessary activity, and people now have more ways to buy than in the past. There are many sorts of buying ways such as shopping online, in outdoor markets, in supermarkets, and so on. Many people believe that shopping in supermarkets is a good way for them because it brings more convenience. In my opinion, shopping in the supermarket is not actually as well as in outdoor by virtue of several reasons following.
On the one hand, I reckon shoppers pay more extra money for commodities in the shopping center than its real value. Most of supermarket systems in VN are a foreign investment like Korea, Thailand, Singapore so this is a reason why a range of merchandise that is imported, except some domestic goods such as fresh vegetables, fish, meat, bread, and so on. It means end users have to pay for high taxes, transport charges, and even other processes. Besides, a certain part of Vietnamese people tends to like foreign imported products having more eye-catching appearance and consider that is better than local ones, so it gradually has less place in shoppers’ decisions.
Another reason is that goods in the supermarket are maintained or preserved in a long time. Managers protect fresh goods from decaying by keeping them at low temperatures or even artificial preservatives. Sometimes they create new foods from old foods, for instance, as the appearance of fruits becomes turn color or wither, staff will slice them and wrap it up by plastic or dry it.
By and large, although it is not a denial that trend of shopping in a supermarket is a part of industrialization and modernization process, those who buy items in supermarkets are more passive than who buy products in the outdoor market for they cannot have the ability to bargain, and grab vast attention to packaged foods and shopping spree. Shoppers should carefully consider and buy needed items since wandering in the shopping center.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 506, Rule ID: FOREIGN_IMPORT[1]
Message: This phrase is redundant. Use simply 'imported'.
Suggestion: imported
...part of Vietnamese people tends to like foreign imported products having more eye-catching appea...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, besides, if, so, well, for instance, i reckon, such as, as well as, by and large, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1608.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 326.0 315.596192385 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.93251533742 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.24917287072 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87446719097 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 185.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567484662577 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 73.947366537 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.692307692 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.0769230769 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153533283455 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0585001484967 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500708912166 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.094827457349 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0705116103184 0.056905535591 124% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.56 50.2224549098 109% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.61 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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