write a letter to your friend about new house
-Explain
-why you move from old house
-what is the look of new house
-invite your friend
Dear cmmay
I hope you are good in health .I am glad to share with you about my new house last month .I have shifted my house in center city near coastal park .
As you know my old house was very narrow only two rooms and small balcony were there ,Lackness of parking area was big drawback of that house. so i was not happy in that house as my children are growing .They also need separate room for their study. so i made plan to move big apartment.This apartment is huge and beautiful ,rooms are very large and airy. Two living rooms are there .Owing to this my childrens are very happy .
Moreover my wife's office is on next to my house so she is very happy because now she has a sufficient time to spend with our children .why you not come to our house next week. I glad to see you ,we will enjoy dinner together and coming saturday please come with your family and children. I will waiting you .
Your Friend
cmmay
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, may, moreover, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 746.0 1615.20841683 46% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 176.0 315.596192385 56% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.23863636364 5.12529762239 83% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 4.20363070211 87% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0575048119 2.80592935109 73% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 176.041082164 62% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 506.74238477 46% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1617610648 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 82.8888888889 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 20.7667163134 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.11111111111 7.06120827912 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 29.0 5.01903807615 578% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.241904196227 0.244688304435 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103785689562 0.084324248473 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0816399452791 0.0667982634062 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151894012308 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0536737328594 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 13.0946893788 63% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 77.57 50.2224549098 154% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.31 12.4159519038 59% => Coleman_liau_index is low.
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.28 8.58950901804 73% => OK
difficult_words: 19.0 78.4519038076 24% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 10.7795591182 65% => The average readability is low. Need to imporve the language.
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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