Some people believe that the main problem of the environment in our time is loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others believe that there are other more important problems. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Environment is the home for all living things. In recent times, the existence of all habitats is under threat due to some ongoing activities in it. The possible cause of this problem has brought a major debate amongst people. Some believe that the loss of some species of plants and animals could be the major cause, while others opine that there are greater problems threatening the environment than the above listed . This essay will discuss both views and my opinion would be made known.
On the one hand, indiscriminate destruction of some plants and animals can cause a huge disruption in the ecosystem. There is an existing relationship between humans , plants and animals. Plants depend on humans for carbondioxide while humans depend on plants for Oxygen which aids their respiration. Also, some animals are pets to a lot of people and over the years these people have developed emotional attachment to these creatures. Therefore, taking them out of the environment can cause depression to such people . For example, my aunty who was admitted into a mental home recently, was quite well until the demise of her puppy.
On the other hand, there are more serious environmental challenges that threatens the human existence on a daily basis . which I agree with. The rising trend in science and technology is the major problem beclouding the world. Most of the machines and cars that a made , emit some green house gases that causes environmental pollution, degradation as well as depletion of the ozone layer. Consequently, resulting in the rising incidence of various diseases that are seen today and also the rise in congenital abnormalities seen in children. For example a study was carried out in Portharcourt that is the major industrialized city in Nigeria. This was done in 2015 and the result showed congenital malformation out of 10 in 1000 live birth of the population . This was totally different from the data that was gotten 20years earlier that had 1 in 1000 live birth as congenitally malformed.
In conclusion, although opinions may vary, I completely agree that the greatest threat to our environment is pollution.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, consequently, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for example, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1791.0 1615.20841683 111% => OK
No of words: 352.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08806818182 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33147354134 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84738826374 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571022727273 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 560.7 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 38.9040807628 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.55 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.6 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.05 7.06120827912 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.4128256513 234% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234478446424 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584541176659 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0741126629738 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.135765009753 0.151304729494 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0941061191094 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 12.4159519038 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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